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POTD 8th Jan 24
NOTHING LESS ~ NOTHING MORE
The ambushed night when all was still, Amidst the gloom, anxiety took my will. Though the moon cast its calming glow, shadows lurked in the night's dark flow. As the final pages turned, I pondered on treasured lessons I'd learned. I took stock as Tick Tock went the clock, shedding a tear. theatrically looming near for the departing Year. A brazen breeze tossed and teased a branch of my old oak tree which gently rapped, softly tapped, tapped on my front door The rapping consistent, and the tapping persistent made me question what if it wasn’t the annoying branch after all? Then who at this ungodly hour would call? There seemed a sense of foreboding with the midnight-hour offloading something in that starless night made me quake with fright. With that ominous knock knock knocking at my front door. Tis nothing I rationalised; uncertainty is dramatized Yet I couldn't quell trepidation, the haunting hesitation Reluctantly, I opened the door just a fraction. Nothing more A large shadow flit on my dimly lit path – Oh my! Oh my beating heart! ” What is it you seek”? I asked in a voice ever so meek. "I seek your council, remember?” he said with a roar "Nothing Less ~ Nothing More." Compelling wrath, the sociopath sought a philomath A ravaged man, it was hard to gauge at a glance his age Wait! Was it the Old Year who revered being dead that stood there, facing that night with never-ending dread? A ripple of compassion, it was my belief ~ I felt his grief. In his agitation, he sought confirmation of his liberation. In the essence of truth, in his year-old youth he was simply a kid who, behind his aged façade, hid When the clock had struck twelve a year to the day, I'd have to say His exuberant beauty enthralled as I recalled Though he struck me as a sensitive entity who, in all vulnerability had asked a question compelling over the months that had me mulling ‘In this life of uncertainty in a year, what's to become of me'? 'Ask in a year,' I had flippantly said with a dismissive nod of my head. So hence, a year later, on my porch, he stood as I somehow knew he would He carried all the burden the world had unburdened Unrecognisable, Ravaged by Disappointment, Anger, Fear, Disenchantment and Resentment Yet no matter what was applied, however, he cried, denied, sighed, he took things in his stride He needed liberty from the oppressive restriction of society, freed from insanity. Yet, even through his despondency, I felt his reluctancy At leaving us his woe. Nothing Less ~ Nothing More I said to him, ‘Take heart even through the cacophony of humanity’s discordancy, The symphony of harmony is besting Before you embark, look within your heart Love explodes from there and beyond. A spiritual bond.10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1… HAPPY NEW YEAR Whereupon… A sprinkling of stardust, and then he had gone The New Year, despite its predecessor's hesitation Through thunderous ovation, felt only elation For in the darkness, we find our strength, And in the light, our freedom at length. And so, the story goes Nothing Less ~ Nothing More Maria Williams © Quote By Marianne Williamson in A Return to Love – 'Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate'. 'Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God. Your playing small doesn’t serve the world.'
POTD 8th Jan 24

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Date: 4/7/2024 6:24:00 PM
Maria, it's cool what you did with the Poe poem - and I learned a new word, "philomath". I like how the new year finds strength, rising from the darkness by the old year, and also the quote by Marianne Williamson.
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Date: 2/25/2024 6:07:00 PM
Dearest Maria, my inspiring poetry sis, your poem is rich and dazzling in concept, vibrant imagery, internal rhymes and exceptional storytelling.. I am in awe of your poetic prowess and and potent finesse. I was emotionally and imaginatively captivated by the lyrical expression of your vivid verse. Your golden pen is such a creative artistic wonder! Belated congrats for well-deserved POTD honors, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/14/2024 11:36:00 PM
My sweet Poetry sis, Susan, thanks so much for the visit, and I'm so glad you liked this. I deeply appreciate your wonderful analysis and artistic comments always . Coming from one of the best poets here, I am really moved, and very appreciative my lovely friend. Lots of Love, Maria.xox
Date: 1/12/2024 7:34:00 AM
Nothing less...nothing more, Maria; you deserve the accolades which have been coming your way so profusely. I very much enjoyed this dialogued narrative. Don't we also look in retropective and wonder if our performance could have been better! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Paul, my friend; I am so glad you liked it, and yes, there's always that looming question: what if? I appreciate your visit and wonderful comments always. Take care, love and hugs xx
Date: 1/9/2024 5:54:00 PM
Belated congratulations Maria on yesterday's poem of the day..It was such a fantastic poem and rhymes were exquisite through out, such a delight to read.
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:28:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment and visit Nancy, so happy you liked it. Hugs
Date: 1/9/2024 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim, nice to see you. Hugs
Date: 1/9/2024 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Maria! Beautiful poetry, my friend. Your quote at the end was powerful and very meaningful. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Bill; so happy you thought so, too. Blessings my friend...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 9:03:00 PM
So intiguing, captivating, lovely and wise, Maria. A big congratulations on POTD. ;)
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:29:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Evelyn, so glad you liked it...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 7:18:00 PM
some great and memorable lines in here - nicely said
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mat, glad you thought so..Maria
Date: 1/8/2024 7:12:00 PM
Two thumbs up for this POTD choice. Way up
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:30:00 PM
Thanks so much my dear friend...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 7:00:00 PM
Dear Maria, there's so much truth within this statement: ' For in the darkness, we find our strength, And in the light, our freedom at length. ' I'm holding your entire poem so close to my heart, because the emotions take me to another time and place. Because of this, 'A sprinkling of stardust, and then he had gone. ' Your words speak of someone you once knew. Moments appear and then, in a flash, they disappear. Time moves on. This is beautiful, yet tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:33:00 PM
So lovely to see you my dear Brandy, always a pleasure. Yes, you're so right; every New Year brings up some sad memories. We've lost many family members and friends in the last few years. My best to you and I hope this year will bring you all your heart desires...Hugs xx
Date: 1/8/2024 6:14:00 PM
Maria, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:34:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Constance, so glad you liked it...Lots of love, Maria.xx
Date: 1/8/2024 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on being POTD Maria your poem is a wonderful journey through the depths of emotions. With masterful storytelling and vivid imagery, that encapsulates the essence of uncertainty, compassion, and the resilience of the human spirit. Your poem's rhythmic flow and profound messages resonate, leaving a lasting impact on the reader's soul. - Blessing, Daniel
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel, so glad you liked it. Thanks for the visit, so appreciated...Maria
Date: 1/8/2024 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day with this marvellous write Maria, poem and quote… Belle
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely visit and comment, dear Beryl; lovely to see you...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 1:27:00 PM
Congratas Maria on your POTD , this is stellar material, xo
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:38:00 PM
Hey Vie, so happy that you liked it. You're a stellar poetess of the highest kind my dear friend...Lots of Love xx
Date: 1/8/2024 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Just love this. Yes. As God's child, we can be just who He created us to be. God bless you dear friend. Congrats on POTD. much love, Gina
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Regina; so glad you liked it, my friend. Lots of Love xx
Date: 1/8/2024 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. Happy New Year. Let's write more in 24........................
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Maria Williams
Date: 1/8/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Paula, so glad you liked it. Happy New Year to you as well, dear...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 5:40:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Maria. So well deserved. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thanks so much for the return visit , Vijay, my dear friend.Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 5:17:00 AM
A personification that lives, excellent - "Nothing never happens"! (always!)
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:43:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Craig, and for the support here and on FB as well, truly appreciated ..Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2024 5:37:00 AM
Ohh that's so zen Cwaigy
Date: 1/8/2024 4:49:00 AM
Back with Congrats on POTD Maria, great writing
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:50:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful writing, Maria. So well deserving for POTD. Congratulations, my dear friend! Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Charlie; always a pleasure seeing you, my friend. So glad you liked it...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 3:38:00 AM
- A perfect poem of the day, Maria ... congratulations ... well deserved :) - hugs
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Anne; appreciate your wonderful visits and comments. Always a pleasure...Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 3:30:00 AM
I'm not familiar with your work but can see why your poem was selected as POTD...a gripping, artistically woven story with outstanding rhymes. The theme was perfect for this time of year. Congrats on POTD, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara. I joined PS in 2017 with my sister Cecilia, who left after a year. Some of the first poets who welcomed me and supported me over the years were Silent One, Tommy W and Anne Lise. I met many wonderful poets along the way, over the years. It's a lovely site for meeting like-minded Souls, as I'm sure you and Bill will do. Thanks for the lovely visit and comment, dear Sara. Hugs
Date: 1/8/2024 1:57:00 AM
Gosh dear Maria what an amazing read this is! Many congratulations on a truly worthy POTD. This was so gripping, so enthralling and captivating So reflective- an array of emotions for the privileged reader to behold. Your gifted, rhyming skills are absolutely outstanding and the flow of the poem remarkable. I loved the sense of Poe throughout the lines. What a truly gifted poet you are with a tremendous, poetic heart. I do hope that you will write more this year and inspire many.
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Christina. I am truly honoured by your beautiful comment. I'm hoping this year I'll be able to write more, life has been quite busy of late. Hugs and blessings dear friend, and all the best to you and your family for 2024 xxx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 1/8/2024 1:58:00 AM
Hugs and blessings dear friend for a wonderful, creative 2024! Xx :):)
Date: 1/8/2024 1:42:00 AM
Dearest Maria, what an immense pleasure to see your stunning poem highly valued and recognised! You are a great poetess of visions and true feelings.. Reading your poetry is truly enlightening and enriching! Congratulations dear on your POTD honour, a well deserved acknowledgement! So happy for you. And always looking forward to reading you. Love and hugs. God bless you.
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:46:00 AM
My dearest Besma, so lovely to see you here. I so look forward to your brilliant comments both here and on FB. How gracious of you to acknowledge and support me over the years. You are a trusted and loyal friend, thank you for that. I appreciate you more than you know, enlightened Soul. Love and Hugs always. xxx
Date: 1/8/2024 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on potd. I wrote a response to your comment but it went under karens comment lol: enjoy your day beautiful maria
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:38:00 AM
Lol, I used to do that all the time when I first joined . Thanks so much for the return visit sweetie, I appreciate it...Hugs
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