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Notebook

My life so pleasant at times others, toil in life's turmoil, lines in a notebook in hand. Hidden words wash over me free flowing with emotion reigning ideas, digging in deep in my inner soul. Retrieving an e l e g y writing for the losses gone. Those exact right freedom words expressing feeling in lines, an artist, but with a pen, all penned into a notebook. 3/22/2023 Writing Challenge - 'N' Words - Poetry Contest 6. Notebook Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/21/2023 8:50:00 PM
So cathartic is my notebook time. I can tell yours may be as well. "an artist with a pen" What a marvelous line. Poems with imagery. I'm happy that you won.
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Date: 3/26/2023 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. There is a lot happening in both the lines and the spaces between the lines. I couldn't help but feel as though the same feelings were "washing over my soul."
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:13:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'N' Words, wonderful writing, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/24/2023 12:34:00 PM
I love it. It was my favorite word she gave also. Congrats
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations, Andrea, this was a quickie.
Date: 3/24/2023 9:54:00 AM
I love your Notebook poem, Eve. Ideas seem to live in pages of notebooks! Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations, Ann. Many blessings
Date: 3/23/2023 1:44:00 AM
Great poem, Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Joanna for the kind words. Many blessings
Date: 3/22/2023 6:27:00 PM
So much going on in your lines and between your lines, Eve. I felt as if the emotions were 'washing over my soul' as well. Kudos, Gershon
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2023 9:33:00 PM
thank you so much , it means alot to me.
Date: 3/22/2023 3:56:00 PM
Hello Eve, what a great idea.Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2023 11:34:00 AM
Hello Eve, You are welcome Eve. Enjoy your day my friend. ?Darlene\ Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words , Darlene. Many blessings
Date: 3/22/2023 12:08:00 PM
This is very nice, Eve. A special notebook for a special lady:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2023 12:20:00 PM
Thank you. How are you feeling?
Date: 3/22/2023 11:41:00 AM
- A notebook at hand is useful for a poet ... a great poem, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. Many blessings
Date: 3/22/2023 11:16:00 AM
Your "Notebook" is a wonderful write. Love the ending. Have a wonderful day writing away...................
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2023 7:33:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Paula. Many blessings

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