Skat A Poet Free verse

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H A T E

~I have no room to hide
the only way is to die~

I hate this world
I hate all it's made of
I lost the love  inside
You are nothing but a joke,
the way you came into my life.
Why do you keep us from the truth
God do you not love us
Why do you insist on these bruises and wounds
Do you not care about the pain and the scars
Trick us with the vanity of the flower
Shower us with the poorest rain
My God where's your power
Do I also have to die for his name
Drown because of everyone else sin
All I wanted was to believe in love
Instead I opened a book of torment
What did I do to you
Why do I feel the battle is with me?
how did i get raped with hate 
What happen to the wings
Why do I feel as if we are all  bait
a world of  no balance, I hate
I retaliate  on my own hate
True love is a program even you deny 
I hate the hate you put upon this world
A hate the look of poverty
resent- IS ME!
confusing the heart to feel nothing
I can't bring my self to need you
You never protected me when in need
You left me suffering alone through the deepest sea
the desert swallowed my dearest mirage
you let me down, to many times
I hate that i still talk to you
the emotions are destroyed
do you laugh  at my beating pulse
you created  many Nations
Meaning you gave hate to this world
making us different in every race 
who else has a key of power to your master plan
I m not blind no more
I see things,   the way he wants me to see
with truth you hide from me
I hate the way this world rotates
I hate the flavor of it all
I was told i was created by your hands
Not Satan's evil ways

God I hate the world you made
Why rest us in a place of love


            S.K.A.T.

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Beata Agustin November 4, 2023 at 7:52 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Frances Schiavina November 2, 2023 at 9:20 AM Today's step paves tomorrow's path. Hate will not be destroyed by death but will continue its descent to the abyss of hell unless the driver steers its will toward gratitude continuing its ascent to paradise of joy and rest .

... Gigno May 20, 2015 at 9:58 PM !!!

John Loving Iii March 1, 2014 at 9:56 PM Yelling at God got me in trouble. But we have to sometimes. I been there. Thank you so much for thetop spot Iin the contest. I must be doing something right to be on your good side.

Robin Davis March 1, 2014 at 2:18 PM SKAT very deep and powerful words. I could feel the anger and pain in every line. Give me their name and I will go postal on their butts. LOL Thanks for the great comment and congrats on my Taming A Heart poem

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 12:27 AM yes! :-)

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2013 at 1:09 AM hahaha, what you said that I cheated using the poem for the sweet baby in your family! But it was nice to get on your winners list with it. Luv , Andrea

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2013 at 1:09 AM How is that cutie baby anyway?? And how are YOU?? Getting excited?

Billy Thekidster May 4, 2010 at 1:16 PM I've commented here before, so I'll just leave the same comment as before. - The joke is on them, jealous of your writting pen. Just block, don't fight. You'll only encourage them. Why do others let these idiots get to them. Why can't all be like me. Laugh At Other's Stupidity. Best Wishes Always S.K.A.T.(theKidster) Billy (Kiddy-Poo to U)

Phil Boy April 21, 2010 at 8:35 AM this is funny! (B* boy)

Billy Thekidster April 19, 2010 at 5:58 AM The joke is on them, jealous of your writting pen. Just block, don't fight. You'll only encourage them. Why do others let these idiots get to them. Why can't all be like me. Laugh At Other's Stupidity. Best Wishes Always S.K.A.T. Wild Bill (theKidster)

Daver Austin April 18, 2010 at 7:35 AM I always look forward to reading your stuff, Irma. You have worthwhile things to say. LOve, daver

Gert W. Knop April 17, 2010 at 5:33 AM Forget al thos people as they aren't worth to think about and hold to your writings! Thank you for your comments and let your pen flowing!!! Have a nice "Fin de semana" ...Rgds. Gert

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2010 at 1:00 PM Hey, Irma, how are you doing? How is the restaurant doing? I already posted to this one, so I am just chit chatting with you since you are such a cool friend. thanks for your comment to me, and please put up a new poem, pretty please? luv, andrea

David Byrne April 12, 2010 at 9:38 PM thanks for your kind comments Irma!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 12, 2010 at 4:48 PM I don't know how this happens Irma ...how they can comment without being on Soup but if it were me I would list the names in a Soup Mail to Management and let them know your concerns and how are they allowed to comment when not members on this site... someone is playing with your head and u are being extremely tolerant and nice ... that is why Soup put the "block" feature to use ..they anticipated this kind of garbage happening .. go to the home page of Soup and see the rules Soup now lists..

Sara Kendrick April 12, 2010 at 10:18 AM Irma, I do not know why some people come on here and cause trouble but the best thing to do is to block them...If it continues, contact administration..Thanks for the kind comments on my work..Sara

Mary Duhart April 12, 2010 at 8:44 AM Join the word of critiques. When I first started writing I would get comments too and when I click on the person there would be nothing posted so I learned to ignore. You don't want to stoop low as them. Learn to disect..keep what you like and block what you don't. Remember it comes with the teritory Thanks for commenting on my work also.

Lynette Chachere April 11, 2010 at 8:10 PM sounds like one person alone.there are always people who believe their joke is funny, they aren't aware of the hurt it does to others -Always&Forever Lynette

Constance La France April 11, 2010 at 6:51 PM Well, a person can be on the soup, paid or unpaid and not post anything, and you blocked them and thats how it is done, but, dear heart are you any better posting peoples names, in your comments, and poetry, so may I suggest, you move on Irma, I miss the sweet Irma, comments.. come back, dear heart.. love constance

John Freeman April 11, 2010 at 5:02 PM Don't know what to make of it Irma.smile. Thanks for your comment today. Agape, Moses

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John Beam April 11, 2010 at 1:39 PM thanks for comment on my poem hope you continue to write skat blockem thata stopem i myself use ceck out what they say about others first

Phil Boy April 10, 2010 at 12:51 PM poor you. i can not answer. but i can say haters.

John Loving Iii April 10, 2010 at 11:39 AM perhaps it is one person. ask the soup to investigate. and try ti ignore the comments that bother you. john

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