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Not Yet Ready - After Dylan Thomas's Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night

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This poem was written for a contest, but the form comes from something that I saw in a poetry class recently. The basic idea is that words of the poem are solely made up of the letters in the last line.

Don’t greet death gently. Those dreary and greyed, stay, hold, ignore that feral, frail, reality. Ignore gainsayers that say those eternal days of flotage on the edge of the great end, dearly holding on, are beyond their strength. Death is the great design for those that forgat the indignity of being. Linger on longer, oh ghost. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Date: 1/4/2022 1:56:00 PM
Such a challenge it must have been to only use letters from the famous Dylan Thomas line. I hope your poetry class was fun and enlightening, are you still in it? Are you still a student at BYU? I've missed you and was so happy to see you make a brief reappearance in the fall. Hope all is going well for you, my friend ~ John
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Heather Secrest
Date: 1/6/2022 4:49:00 PM
I really enjoyed my poetry class!! I'm taking a YA lit class this semester instead. I'm still at BYU, but I am hopefully graduating this spring! I got to writing in the class and remembered once again how much I love poetry, going into STEM doesn't leave a lot of room for other things, but poetry is still the best and poetry soup will always be my home for poetry!
Date: 10/18/2021 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful words, Heather. Congratulations on your high placement!
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Heather Secrest
Date: 11/9/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you!

Book: Shattered Sighs