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Not Afraid To Say I Love You

Just thoughts of your sunset eyes slowly drifting off to dreamland excite my senses sending soft tickles throughout my body those ruby red lips whisper sweet lullabies putting an ease to my muddled mind. tonight my heart smiles kissing your soul as it enters places never touched never allowed to be touched and I am not afraid I am not afraid to say those words the words I think all the time. the world won't stop for us and yes I love you

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Alexis Y.

Date: 8/25/2015 10:32:00 PM

Tim, this is very romantic! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 8/25/2015 6:32:00 PM

Great write, congratulations

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/25/2015 11:13:00 AM

'Sunset eyes' and then 'kissing your soul' are absolutely unique and original as is this entire poem...What woman could resist THAT? Congratulations Tim...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/25/2015 2:42:00 AM

Awesome romantic write Tim! Congrats on big win! Wonderful pic as well!

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2015 10:54:00 PM

Tim. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:12:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Sharon Gulley

Date: 5/27/2015 3:19:00 PM

Wow! I love this Tim. A wonderfully passionate write....Sharon :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2015 1:49:00 PM

Romantic and sweet. Your muse must be over the moon with this write. Lovely. Thanks for your visit to my poem. :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2015 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Eileen. I think she smiled.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 9:32:00 AM

Absolutely lovely thoughts you've penned there, Tim. A 7.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2015 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Kim...have a great week.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/24/2015 1:31:00 PM

Your words soft and warm as an embrace! Beautiful write, Tim! Love, Kim

Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2015 9:43:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim...have a blessed evening Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2015 8:58:00 AM

- Beautiful, Tim! - I love U 2 !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thanks A-L....been away most of the weekend...I'll stop by later

James Peranteau

Date: 5/23/2015 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful admiration of your love dear poet ! Poetry rocks for sharing with the soul who moves us ! Awesome.....have a blessed weekend Tim...much love, james

Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words James...hope your weekend went well...Tim

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/23/2015 12:21:00 PM

One wish, one heart, one love...feelings that float within your thoughts and land gently within our hearts. Very well written. Emile. #7

Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2015 9:39:00 PM

Thanks Emile...haven't been around much this past weekend...Ill try to drop in tomorrow

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 1:42:00 AM

So sweet Tim, love this. A perfect 7 to 10. SKAT

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thanks Skat....have a great weekend

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/23/2015 1:39:00 AM

Lucky lady to have such beautiful words floating her way...So so romantic it hush hushes the stars..A favourite :.).Tom.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 3:05:00 AM

Thanks Charmu .....this turkey means those words...I love you......hugs Tim

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/22/2015 11:07:00 PM

I love you speaks boldly in this beautiful piece. What you have penned is very romantic .It drew me in instantly.I'm glad I stopped by. You get a 7 from me. Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thank Alexis...happy to have you stop by....Tim

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/22/2015 9:21:00 PM

Not afraid to say this is another beautiful romantic poem!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2015 9:38:00 AM

Thank you my friend....my heart almost stopped Saturday night...I blinked and missed those 3 Duck goals....luckily we survived

Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2015 9:04:00 PM

3 wonderful little words everyone should hear a7 hugs dear friend

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 3:02:00 AM

Thanks Eve...yes they need to be said

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/22/2015 6:59:00 PM

"my heart smiles kissing your soul" That is beyond beautiful in description Tim. (sighs in hearts contentment) Now if only my husband was the one writing it...LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 3:01:00 AM

He could borrow it....thanks Tim

Constance La France

Date: 5/22/2015 6:25:00 PM

Tim, this write is beautiful, so romantic and full of love

Tim Smith
Date: 5/23/2015 2:59:00 AM

Thank you BW