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Not Afraid To Say I Love You

Just thoughts of your sunset eyes

slowly drifting off to dreamland

excite my senses sending

soft tickles throughout my body

those ruby red lips whisper

sweet lullabies putting an

 ease to my muddled mind.

tonight my heart smiles

kissing your soul as it

enters places never touched

never allowed to be touched

and I am not afraid

I am not afraid to say those words

the words I think all the time.

the world won't stop for us 

and    yes

I love you

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Alexis Y. Date: 8/25/2015 10:32:00 PM Tim, this is very romantic! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis Login to Reply

Shirley Rebstock Date: 8/25/2015 6:32:00 PM Great write, congratulations Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 8/25/2015 11:13:00 AM 'Sunset eyes' and then 'kissing your soul' are absolutely unique and original as is this entire poem...What woman could resist THAT? Congratulations Tim... Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/25/2015 2:42:00 AM Awesome romantic write Tim! Congrats on big win! Wonderful pic as well! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/24/2015 10:54:00 PM Tim. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 5/28/2015 10:12:00 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7! Login to Reply

Sharon Gulley Date: 5/27/2015 3:19:00 PM Wow! I love this Tim. A wonderfully passionate write....Sharon :) Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/25/2015 1:49:00 PM Romantic and sweet. Your muse must be over the moon with this write. Lovely. Thanks for your visit to my poem. :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2015 1:58:00 PM Thank you Eileen. I think she smiled.

Kp Nunez Date: 5/25/2015 9:32:00 AM Absolutely lovely thoughts you've penned there, Tim. A 7. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2015 9:57:00 AM Thank you Kim...have a great week.

Kim Merryman Date: 5/24/2015 1:31:00 PM Your words soft and warm as an embrace! Beautiful write, Tim! Love, Kim Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/24/2015 9:43:00 PM Thank you very much Kim...have a blessed evening Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/24/2015 8:58:00 AM - Beautiful, Tim! - I love U 2 !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/24/2015 9:41:00 PM Thanks A-L....been away most of the weekend...I'll stop by later

James Peranteau Date: 5/23/2015 7:30:00 PM Beautiful admiration of your love dear poet ! Poetry rocks for sharing with the soul who moves us ! Awesome.....have a blessed weekend Tim...much love, james Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/24/2015 9:40:00 PM Thank you for your kind words James...hope your weekend went well...Tim

Emile Pinet Date: 5/23/2015 12:21:00 PM One wish, one heart, one love...feelings that float within your thoughts and land gently within our hearts. Very well written. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/24/2015 9:39:00 PM Thanks Emile...haven't been around much this past weekend...Ill try to drop in tomorrow

Skat A Date: 5/23/2015 1:42:00 AM So sweet Tim, love this. A perfect 7 to 10. SKAT Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 3:06:00 AM Thanks Skat....have a great weekend

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/23/2015 1:39:00 AM Lucky lady to have such beautiful words floating her way...So so romantic it hush hushes the stars..A favourite :.).Tom. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 3:05:00 AM Thanks Charmu .....this turkey means those words...I love you......hugs Tim

Alexis Y. Date: 5/22/2015 11:07:00 PM I love you speaks boldly in this beautiful piece. What you have penned is very romantic .It drew me in instantly.I'm glad I stopped by. You get a 7 from me. Alexis Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 8:18:00 AM Thank Alexis...happy to have you stop by....Tim

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/22/2015 9:21:00 PM Not afraid to say this is another beautiful romantic poem! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2015 9:38:00 AM Thank you my friend....my heart almost stopped Saturday night...I blinked and missed those 3 Duck goals....luckily we survived

Eve Roper Date: 5/22/2015 9:04:00 PM 3 wonderful little words everyone should hear a7 hugs dear friend Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 3:02:00 AM Thanks Eve...yes they need to be said

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 5/22/2015 6:59:00 PM "my heart smiles kissing your soul" That is beyond beautiful in description Tim. (sighs in hearts contentment) Now if only my husband was the one writing it...LOL Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 3:01:00 AM He could borrow it....thanks Tim

Constance La France Date: 5/22/2015 6:25:00 PM Tim, this write is beautiful, so romantic and full of love Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 2:59:00 AM Thank you BW