Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Nostalgic Longing

I walk, hear nature's moving sounds 
carried slowly through forest paths 
nostalgic scent of moist dew grounds. 

fleeting dappled somber fingers 
unclosing against vast sky, cause
outside world so nimble lingers. 

braids of pain stifle my madness
loves unavoidable death; my
head bowed with cherishing sadness.


10/21/2020

Writing Challenge - Tercets - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

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Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2020 at 7:56 AM Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I walk, hear nature's moving sounds ." Nature does have many sounds. Enjoy your win and day with a hug...................

Jan Allison November 3, 2020 at 2:11 PM Such a moving poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans November 1, 2020 at 12:49 PM Congrats on your win. Deep emotions there, well done.

Barry Stebbings November 1, 2020 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your win, Eve. Beautiful poem on nostalgia and sadness.

Constance La France November 1, 2020 at 7:37 AM Eve, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance

Jo Chamberlain October 31, 2020 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on your win. :-)

Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on the win Eve! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2020 at 11:21 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Koplin October 31, 2020 at 10:33 AM Congrats on your win!

Victor Buhagiar October 21, 2020 at 11:21 PM Well written poem in tercets form. Best for a win. ~~

John Watt October 21, 2020 at 9:19 PM A deeply moving write, Eve. I like how you mingle nature with human longing for a loved one. Hugs ~ John

Gershon Wolf October 21, 2020 at 1:36 PM Lovely tercet, Eve. Best of luck in the contest. Light and Joy, Gershon