Nostalgic Longing

I walk, hear nature's moving sounds carried slowly through forest paths nostalgic scent of moist dew grounds. fleeting dappled somber fingers unclosing against vast sky, cause outside world so nimble lingers. braids of pain stifle my madness loves unavoidable death; my head bowed with cherishing sadness. 10/21/2020 Writing Challenge - Tercets - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/4/2020 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I walk, hear nature's moving sounds ." Nature does have many sounds. Enjoy your win and day with a hug...................
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Date: 11/3/2020 2:11:00 PM
Such a moving poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Deep emotions there, well done.
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Date: 11/1/2020 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. Beautiful poem on nostalgia and sadness.
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Date: 11/1/2020 7:37:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 10/31/2020 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Eve! Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/21/2020 11:21:00 PM
Well written poem in tercets form. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 10/21/2020 9:19:00 PM
A deeply moving write, Eve. I like how you mingle nature with human longing for a loved one. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 10/21/2020 1:36:00 PM
Lovely tercet, Eve. Best of luck in the contest. Light and Joy, Gershon
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