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Nocturnal Voices

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ nocturnal voices join in the ancient chorus old souls hear the songs

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/15/2024 6:12:00 PM

Almost nighttime. Time to turn up the volume on my hearing aid. ~ Old Soul

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/16/2024 5:22:00 AM

dear 'old soul'--thanks for your visit and for your witty response. I think my hearing is now dissipating some...oh drats! have a great day, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2024 1:15:00 PM

I really like this one, and yes indeed, one who has an old soul is going to appreciate the sounds of night.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 5:36:00 PM

thanks for your comments, Andrea. I'm glad you understand 'old souls.' Appreciate you and your visit, hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/15/2024 11:39:00 AM

I liked this senyru. There is a sense of secrecy in the night.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 5:36:00 PM

thank you, Hilda...secrecy at night...I agree. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/14/2024 7:29:00 PM

Probably the nocturnal chorus is meant for old souls. While we sleep, they may be awake. As Bill has rightly observed it is an intriguing Senryu! Sending you love, dear Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 3:43:00 AM

good point, Valsa...perhaps so. I appreciate you stopping by and for finding my poem intriguing. hugs for the day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 2/14/2024 6:11:00 PM

Beautiful!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 3:42:00 AM

thank you, dear Paige. Have a splendid day, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 5:57:00 PM

Intriguing Senryu, Sara. I hear those voice during meditations sometimes. Peace and Love to you, my soulmate. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 3:42:00 AM

thank you, my hubby and soulmate. Perhaps the voices are awake while we're asleep. hugs for the day, me.