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Nocturnal Forest

Edited to include "creatures of the night" They wait for shadows to rush and fill their forest home. Then ushered in by the hoot of the owl or the whip-poor-will’s call, they appear as silently as the black of night itself. A fawn in hiding ambles over to a pebbled pool. Its family follows. Fireflies flicker about like tiny lanterns and the incessant murmur of insects fills the air. Somewhere – cloaked in darkness – a frog croaks. Soft splashes in the pool reveal ducklings paddling along. Creatures of the night - badgers, raccoons, and other tiny furry creatures - scurry through bushes foraging for prey smaller than themselves. Ears prick at the sound of a lone wolf’s howl. June 12, 2022

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Date: 6/23/2022 2:26:00 AM
"Creatures of the night - badgers, raccoons, and other tiny furry creatures - scurry through bushes "oh, yes! A beautiful write. Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2022 10:28:00 AM
Andrea, your winning poem is like sitting quietly in the woods on a warm summer night with all the loveliest delights of sights and sounds spreading a cloak of serenity. Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the respite! Blessings!
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Date: 6/16/2022 8:24:00 AM
Busy imagery... wonderfully written together to create a master picture. Excellent work. ann
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Date: 6/15/2022 3:45:00 PM
So happy to see this on Brian’s short winning list Andrea. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/15/2022 10:42:00 AM
A beautiful portrait of nature. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/15/2022 1:09:00 AM
Your words have painted a serene picture with exquisite imagery Andrea. If for a contest, it is sure to be a top winner. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/14/2022 3:26:00 PM
The many sounds of nature. I liked your poem, Andrea. The final two lines were great imagery. Have a great week my friend. Bill
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Date: 6/13/2022 10:29:00 PM
What a magical place!!! Loved the fireflies and the lanterns comparison... lovely imagery throughout.
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Date: 6/13/2022 1:23:00 PM
There you go again, painting a picture in my mind. Your imagery is superb.
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Date: 6/13/2022 11:58:00 AM
your poem captures the forest very well though you forgot to mention the ticks and spiders...good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/13/2022 8:25:00 AM
Something magical about the forest at nightime where all the nocturnal creatures come out to search for food. Tom
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Date: 6/13/2022 7:44:00 AM
Andrea, You have painted such a vivd picture of night's creatures. I love each nuance of this . It came to life right in front of me. Sights, Sounds and smells ! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 6/13/2022 2:07:00 AM
This beautiful write went straight to my heart and my fave list Andrea
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Date: 6/12/2022 6:33:00 PM
Beautifully written, Andrea. I had no idea how to approach this contest, and since Julia generally selects only three winners, I chose not to enter. Best wishes to you, though.
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Date: 6/12/2022 5:49:00 PM
Andrea, graceful and flowing, your creatures of the night are a bucolic wonderland. Good Luck! Anaya
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Date: 6/12/2022 4:27:00 PM
Dear Andrea, vibrant imagery brings me to the center of the nocturnal forest where I feel both the thrill and the chill of the nightlife.. your last two lines send a shiver down the spine. Such a stirring free verse. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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