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Tiens mes pensées
close let your dreams lie
impassioned albeit pensive
succumb to the sultry beats
echoing across empty hearts
and within the day breeze
tomber en moi

Faraway but close enough to see
you no longer holding me
I know 
yes
I see

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2016

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Darren White Date: 1/27/2017 1:59:00 PM I still come back to this poem so often Tim, because it's so INCREDIBLY good! Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 12/1/2016 6:07:00 PM I knew there was a reason for my picking a Tim Smith poem to read tonight. So moving. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 12/1/2016 6:21:00 PM Thanks so much

Jean Murray Date: 11/30/2016 6:36:00 PM My God Tim, your poems reach in. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/2/2016 12:00:00 PM So...YOU were the creep?? I knew it! Tim Smith Date: 12/1/2016 6:11:00 PM Thanks Jean...since I got banned from POF I have more time to write j/k...lol

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/30/2016 3:08:00 PM Heartbreaking, Tim. Expressed so well...that ending says it all. The song is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.... Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 3:11:00 PM Thanks Eileen. It is such a moving song

Jan Allison Date: 11/30/2016 1:23:00 PM beautiful but so sad Tim:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 2:04:00 PM It is a sad one...thanks Jan

Chris Green Date: 11/30/2016 6:16:00 AM Sadly beautiful my friend. I hope this is only your imagination writing... Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:24:00 AM Mostly imagination...it is such a powerful song

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/30/2016 4:44:00 AM - I fell deeply into this song ... a wonderful singing voice :) - Thanks Tim, for both poetry and song ... deeply moving - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:23:00 AM Yes so did I...I love his voice

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/30/2016 2:27:00 AM This is very sad Tim...Sad indeed..but beautifully written. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:22:00 AM Thanks Charma...that song always makes me tear up...I got caught in the emotions and wrote this.

Darren White Date: 11/30/2016 2:23:00 AM 7 fav..... But also so sad. Hope you okay. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:21:00 AM Thanks Darren...that song resonates at times but I am okay.

Eve Roper Date: 11/29/2016 10:12:00 PM Tim, very good :-) I will save you a stack of pancakes Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:20:00 AM Thanks Eve :)

White Wolf Date: 11/29/2016 10:12:00 PM A definite 7/7! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:19:00 AM Thanks so much Rick

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/29/2016 9:21:00 PM Loved this, a fav, in those few words, more than a song was said! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 10:19:00 AM Thanks my friend