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Tiens mes pensées close let your dreams lie impassioned albeit pensive succumb to the sultry beats echoing across empty hearts and within the day breeze tomber en moi Faraway but close enough to see you no longer holding me I know yes I see

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Darren White

Date: 1/27/2017 1:59:00 PM

I still come back to this poem so often Tim, because it's so INCREDIBLY good!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/1/2016 6:07:00 PM

I knew there was a reason for my picking a Tim Smith poem to read tonight. So moving.

Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thanks so much

Jean Murray

Date: 11/30/2016 6:36:00 PM

My God Tim, your poems reach in.

Jean Murray
Date: 12/2/2016 12:00:00 PM

So...YOU were the creep?? I knew it!

Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 6:11:00 PM

Thanks Jean...since I got banned from POF I have more time to write j/k...lol

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/30/2016 3:08:00 PM

Heartbreaking, Tim. Expressed so well...that ending says it all. The song is beautiful. Thanks for sharing....

Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Eileen. It is such a moving song

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2016 1:23:00 PM

beautiful but so sad Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 2:04:00 PM

It is a sad one...thanks Jan

Chris Green

Date: 11/30/2016 6:16:00 AM

Sadly beautiful my friend. I hope this is only your imagination writing...

Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:24:00 AM

Mostly imagination...it is such a powerful song

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2016 4:44:00 AM

- I fell deeply into this song ... a wonderful singing voice :) - Thanks Tim, for both poetry and song ... deeply moving - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:23:00 AM

Yes so did I...I love his voice