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Nine-Seventeen Pm

At exactly nine-seventeen pm... while I was watching a movie, the phone rang twice and stopped. Perhaps a wrong number dialed. Before that thought left my mind it rang again...I picked it up. His voice was low, breathing hard... his words struck like a sword... "I'm watching you...beware." I slammed down the phone, paused to slowly catch my breath and quickly called the police. I found out that others called in the same complaint to no avail... his phone number, untraceable... He was never found. Every night, at nine-seventeen pm, terror strikes as I hold my breath, counting seconds as the clock's hands slowly pass...and then, later Counting skipped heartbeats as I try hard to fall asleep... those words flashing by in my mind... "I'm watching you...beware." Sandra M. Haight ~8th Place~ Contest: Nineseventeen PM Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: July 14, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/17/2018 8:04:00 AM

Ewww!! Scary... Congratulations on your win. Start of a great short story here. Well done!

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:07:00 PM

Yes, the theme lead to 'scary' for me! Thanks for your congrats and nice comment, Susan. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2018 11:10:00 AM

Scary stuff, Sandra, insomuch as I've taken the '9' off my bedside clock. So that's alright then. Congrats! Viv x

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:06:00 PM

Haha, good idea, Viv! Thanks for the visit and congrats! Sandra

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/15/2018 2:59:00 AM

Congratulations, Sandra on your win. I liked the poem because I wrote something similar in " A Stranger Calls At Midnight", posted on August 3, 2017. You may find it interesting.

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:13:00 PM

Thank you, Subimal, for your congrats and supportive comment. I did read your poem, and it was awesome as I indicated in my comment there! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2018 10:33:00 AM

Nicely done, I remember having a phone call just like this in my early twenties when I lived in an apartment complex. I was scary. Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:04:00 PM

Wow, that must have been very frightening, Eve! Thank you for your congratulations and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/14/2018 10:07:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your much-deserved win, Sandra!

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Edward! Sandra

Haley Fisher

Date: 7/14/2018 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations! I really liked this! Fearing 9:17 pm daily.

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, Haley, for your visit and supportive comments! Sandra

James Inman

Date: 7/14/2018 8:01:00 AM

I like this a lot Sandra, spooky. A great interpretation of the theme.

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:02:00 PM

Thank you very much, James! Your visit and supportive comment are much appreciated. Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 7/14/2018 7:37:00 AM

Damn Sandra....I checked all the window locks after reading this one....thanks for participating in the contest

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:01:00 PM

Thank you for a great theme to steer our imaginations, John. I enjoyed writing for it and I appreciate my placement in your contest. Sandra

Mick Talbot

Date: 7/14/2018 7:22:00 AM

Wow! A first place in my book, a forever nightmare, scary! Congratulations Sandra! Mick

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 8:00:00 PM

Thank you, Mick! Your supportive comments are much appreciated! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2018 1:34:00 PM

good approach to this theme, SAndra. I am seeing so many different ways people are looking at this one. I really liked this.

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/4/2018 10:37:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea...the theme makes room for lots of imagination for sure! Hugs, Sandra

Lyric Man

Date: 7/2/2018 11:45:00 PM

Sandra.. creative write I enjoyed to read!

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/4/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lyric! So many varied stories are coming out of this prompt! Sandra

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/2/2018 5:26:00 PM

Great take on the contest prompt, Sandra - I hope this did not actually happen to you. That would be so scary.

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2018 5:33:00 PM

Hi Agnes, just fiction, but believable these days for sure. Thanks for reading it and leaving your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 7/2/2018 1:03:00 PM

It's horrible ....you have painted a grim picture of today's insecurity...... you are always under surveillance, my God... "I'm watching you...beware." It could be the act of loonies.......Beware ....A brilliant piece, Sandra..Have a good day. Hugs!>rajat

Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2018 1:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Rajat. My poem was fiction but can be very real in today's world as you say in your comment. I very much appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Sandra