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Four kegs, they’d left on the rye field’s bare crest
gone were the skittles and the balls of wood.
Four kegs empty of magical brew, strewn
upon the hill’s breasts, where gnomes had stood.

They’d left long ago, twenty years today.
Here’d been a mountain, where now a farm stood.
They had left their tipple as each strike thundered
to lambaste lightning from stacked firewood.

On the rye field’s bare crest now shrouded in snow
beneath a Wedgwood sky, stood kegs of wood.
On the rye field’s bare crest each keg turned stone
marking the bones where rebels once stood.

Gone ‘till tonight, the gnomes and jack tars
until the moon’s magic topped the keg’s wood.
Gone till tonight were the hard balls and pegs
this night spirits would dance where we now stood.

Published 2017 by Illumen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 10/12/2019 6:02:00 PM
I get the music, but not quite, and the words, but not all. Here are mysteries I don't want revealed. There's an invitation to stake a claim. I'm in! I know just how to dance to this. What a treasure! Thanks.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/12/2019 8:03:00 PM
why thank you!
Date: 3/14/2019 2:05:00 AM
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Date: 3/4/2019 9:31:00 AM
Wow! A strong strong story with wonderful imagery. Definitely going into my Fav's. // Barry
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:00:00 PM
This is gorgeous Debbie! It is going straight into my Faves. It reminds me of my Jayhawk family. Love, Connie : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2019 2:08:00 PM
I just had to "fave"; it's to good.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/9/2019 5:34:00 PM
wow so sweet!! Light & Love M. L.
Date: 1/9/2019 4:12:00 AM
Tars to lubbers, salts to shore ... lovely and enigmatic weave, Debbie, I thoroughly enjoyed this gem of a tale. I envisioned a hob jigging in the moonlight. Blessings and Happy New Year to you and yours!
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Date: 1/4/2019 3:13:00 PM
Hello Debbie, I like the tale you told in this poem. Well done. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2019 2:20:00 PM
- Debbie, I wish you and your family a blessed and lovely New Year :) - hugs from Norway :)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/1/2019 2:23:00 PM
Thank you dear & to you & yours as well! Light & Love
Date: 10/25/2018 12:41:00 PM
Love the eerie suspense, Deb! with Jack Tar Sailors roaming the land once ashore, the gnome spirits of nightfall and the sweet lyricism of your talent throughout!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/25/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Jimbo!