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Nighttime Serenade

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ nighttime serenade thunder sings to the moonlight a lullaby bold even the stars listen close to tales told in rumbles deep

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/28/2024 5:57:00 PM

Love your imagery in this finely written Tanka poem, Sara. Powerful poetry! Hugs, Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 3/25/2024 3:46:00 PM

Interesting take on this subject-

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 5:02:00 PM

thank you, dear Paige. Appreciate your visit. hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/25/2024 7:45:00 AM

Imagery is so vivid here just like the image.. you did this one very well.. the arrangement of words adds to the depth of your tanka...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 2:02:00 PM

thanks, dear Silent One, for your positive comments about the imagery within my poem and with the image. Grateful for you and your visits. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/25/2024 2:05:00 AM

Wow this is beautiful! I just love it! The idea of how stars sing along to thunder, magical and soulfully divine. Nighttime serenade when thunder sings to moonlight, how captivating is that? Just dreamy. Youv made thunder sound beautiful. So many tales… they rumble and whisper , in nature, i think the stars sees them all. I love this! A big fave for this. One of the best tankas iv read in a while. Sending you light always. Hope weather is fine there

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 7:14:00 AM

dearest Ink--I immersed myself in your comments, for they are always spellbinding. You seem to always capture the essence of my poems and with such enthusiasm! So grateful for your visits and your kind words. Humbly grateful for the fave...means a great deal to me. Weather is fine here (rainy but not cold). How 'bout in your part of the world? Hugs for today, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/24/2024 7:50:00 PM

Very interesting read!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 7:12:00 AM

Thanks, dear Abdullah, for visiting and for your comments. Have a splendid day, Sara

Peter Dome

Date: 3/24/2024 7:45:00 PM

Wow. Can I borrow your brain for a while?. Another stunning piece.very well done. Another Favourite. Take care Pete.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 7:11:00 AM

aww, what a delightful comment, Peter. My brain is unique so you might want to rethink borrowing it :-) Grateful for the fave as well as your visit today, Enjoy your day, Sara

Tonye George

Date: 3/24/2024 6:56:00 PM

The thunder has so much might and ego, so the stars would definitely listen so they don't get smacked. Great write Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2024 7:10:00 AM

you're right...stars are smart to listen to the thunder (as should we humans); otherwise, we will get smacked. Enjoyed your witty comment as well as you complimentary words. Wishing you a pleasant day, hugs, Sara