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Nighttime Musings- For Contest

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chest rises and falls who excites her sleeping sighs best not to ask her

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/28/2015 11:32:00 AM

Lol , I really enjoyed reading your poem my friend beautiful write , great as always...Happy new year for u and all of ur beloved one's and hugs / / :) dalia

James Fraser

Date: 12/26/2015 11:14:00 AM

Love this cute and dangerous Senyru Viv, very clever ;) ~~ smiles ~~ James :)

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/27/2015 1:58:00 AM

If we could read dreams, James, how would the divorce lawyers ever cope? Have a happy and prosperous New year. All the best, Viv

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/15/2015 11:16:00 PM

Man, you woke my beast and the wife is fast asleep. lol Superb Senryu my friend ! A7

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/15/2015 11:53:00 PM

Stop musing and get back to sleep, Robert :) . Thanks for dropping by- hope you're doing o.k. Regards, Viv

James Inman

Date: 12/15/2015 11:49:00 AM

We all have our fantasies, Viv. As long as I'm the one she wakes up with in the morning everything's good. Nice Senryu.

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/15/2015 10:22:00 PM

Exactly, James. But I hope that your good lady doesn't talk in your sleep like mine does. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus

Date: 12/11/2015 2:59:00 PM

Unless she talks in her sleep, better off to live in ignorance...or is it?! A lovely senryu...so is the visual that goes with it! ~ Regards // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/11/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thanks Paul.The visual obviously isn't my missus, since we don't sleep with the light on. Which means I'm not faced with slices of cucumber, face cream , rollers and other erotic paraphernalia.... Regards, Viv

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/11/2015 1:37:00 PM

Nice one, Viv! Gosh, my hubby becomes "breathless" while sleeping because he has sleep apnea...guess I should think about that! :) :) GL wishes for the contest. Sandra

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/11/2015 8:58:00 PM

...but I'm sure that his name is the only one to escape from your dreams, Sandra, after all these years. Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 12/9/2015 8:43:00 AM

Made me smile - tell her just to call everyone 'darling' lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/11/2015 12:33:00 AM

The time to worry is when one week she says 'Eric', then the next week 'Colin', and- hang on- lovemaking every week? Huh. I wish.....