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Night Time Quiet

I love when the sun finally sets coming home during the evening when one can get a little rest sitting under the fan twirling on the ceiling, Being able to finally kick my shoes off and let my toes have some wiggle room not having to listen to my boss or various co-workers vent and fume, Nor not having to look at the clock and rush to make production its a rush driving home to my block where home sweet home is welcome, You can hear the quiet at night time after the evening slowly fades away folks like me need this which is no crime calms down nerves after putting in a full day. 6-3-17

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Date: 6/17/2017 10:05:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/17/2017 8:02:00 PM
Thanks so much for Very kind comment and visit Funom; much appreciate it my friend!~Che :)
Date: 6/8/2017 8:02:00 PM
Cheryl. I LOVE this poem. But it is more a quatrain than a quatern. So you need to give it the right form if it's for BW's form contest. Good luck. It's so nice!!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/9/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Andrea; also for letting me know about the wrong form too…changed it to quatrain! Thanks my friend, appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 6/7/2017 8:11:00 AM
Perfect rhyme and poem!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/7/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 6/6/2017 12:22:00 PM
Very idyllic and peaceful poem, Cheryl. I like how your mind works. Peace and quiet is a luxury I would gladly pay for at this stage of my life. Lovely poem, dear. Love and hugs always.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/6/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Freddie; right now I am relishing the peace & quiet (while it lasts, lol!) Peace & love~Hugs Che :)
Date: 6/3/2017 9:36:00 PM
Beautiful and peace.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit and peace to you too Steve!~Che :)

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