Night Shoes

the mountains we fear
are getting too hard to climb
our youth has deserted us
we have grown old like wine

wrinkled and gray
from the roads of our years
slowed by winds
from our happiness and tears

we search for the sound
of our younger hearts
days of wonder
our triumphed start

our legs are now weary
from the distance of life
our love held together
through hurdles of strife

we enter the night and wear its shoes
where we shuffle along through hallways of pain
and hold our hands tighter
for the life we share an all it contained 

these shoes of our night
are softer than the chairs where we rock
and reflect with each other
as we await the final tic of the clock


5/19/19 contest Night Shoes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:20 PM
great use of metaphor, Frederic. Congrats for your awesome win!
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 7:24 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Frederic! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Love it, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
Sergi Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 10:52 AM
A positive poem on one of the demons of reality. Good Luck, Fredric!
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 3:19 PM
frederic, we all will wear the shoes of old age hopefully with softest of comfort... wonderful rendition of the theme with splendid metaphors... huggs
Hamilton Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Well said Frederic, we do await the final tic toc of the clock. I enjoyed your interpretation of the contest prompt.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 2:04 AM
"we search for the sound of our younger hearts days of wonder our triumphed start" I think of this poem and I smile. I look in the mirror and I wonder "who are you?" Nicely done.
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