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Night Shoes

the mountains we fear are getting too hard to climb our youth has deserted us we have grown old like wine wrinkled and gray from the roads of our years slowed by winds from our happiness and tears we search for the sound of our younger hearts days of wonder our triumphed start our legs are now weary from the distance of life our love held together through hurdles of strife we enter the night and wear its shoes where we shuffle along through hallways of pain and hold our hands tighter for the life we share an all it contained these shoes of our night are softer than the chairs where we rock and reflect with each other as we await the final tic of the clock 5/19/19 contest Night Shoes

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Date: 5/26/2019 3:20:00 PM
great use of metaphor, Frederic. Congrats for your awesome win!
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Date: 5/25/2019 7:24:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Frederic! Janice
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Date: 5/25/2019 6:04:00 PM
Love it, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2019 10:52:00 AM
A positive poem on one of the demons of reality. Good Luck, Fredric!
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Date: 5/20/2019 3:19:00 PM
frederic, we all will wear the shoes of old age hopefully with softest of comfort... wonderful rendition of the theme with splendid metaphors... huggs
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Date: 5/20/2019 1:54:00 PM
Well said Frederic, we do await the final tic toc of the clock. I enjoyed your interpretation of the contest prompt.
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Date: 5/20/2019 2:04:00 AM
"we search for the sound of our younger hearts days of wonder our triumphed start" I think of this poem and I smile. I look in the mirror and I wonder "who are you?" Nicely done.
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