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Night of Dread

Night of Dread “Halloween” night – “descending” “gloom” – Lost in a forest of “living” “silhouettes” Tangled branches obscure the skies In veils of opaque ebony blackness As phantoms of thick “dread” Rise From “open” crypts of “darkness” Where “walking” echoes chant elegies of doom And set a pounding heartbeat’s panic As “creepy” creeping ghostly fingers Graze the naked neck To claw at crushed leaves That snap like brittle bones Under panicked feet Looking – Frantic searching - For escape from this twisted labyrinth Of screaming angst, Where prowling wraiths with cold lips of frenzy And souls lost to the daylight Breathe from exile, musty breaths In fogs on vanishing paths of vertigo And torpid lethargy Until ascendent midnight Lifts up this vale of fainting frights with moonlight, Shadows glinting through bare boughs, For All Hallows Night. 10-25-22 Contest: Halloween 14-30 Lines - 27 Lines Sponsor: Emile Pinet Use ten words as written: creepy, descending, silhouettes, gloom, darkness, living, open, walking, Halloween, dread. Chosen words italicized.

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Date: 11/3/2022 9:06:00 AM
This poem should be chosen to come first, second and third. It is so powerful the way you used all the words you had to encompass in this write, and you did this so creatively, revealing Halloween as the scary creepy night it is. hope you are well my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/3/2022 12:34:00 PM
Jennifer, dear friend, thank you many times over for your wonderful feedback! Emile's words were a scary Halloween story just waiting to be told! They were truly the gift of inspiration. I do love the eerie, not horrific or gory, side of Halloween. We decorate our front porch with cheesecloth ghosts, lights, a fog machine, Mr. Bones on the bench and a graveyard. The kids and their parents love it and want to take pictures. On a more serious note, Halloween is the time when we laugh at death because we know the victory. Blessings sweet friend! Hope you had a wonderful All Saints and All Souls and that you are healthy!
Date: 10/30/2022 4:04:00 AM
This is SO good, Sam. It should also do very well in Emile's contest. Best wishes. Charlie
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie! I have my fingers crossed. Emile's words were great! They set the tone for this write and put me on the path of this Halloween tale. It was fun to write this one. Hope you are doing well! Sending you all the blessing treats of the season and positively no tricks!
Date: 10/28/2022 8:43:00 PM
What a fantastic entry for the contest ! There are all the ingredients needed for a ghost story !"In veils of opaque ebony blackness As phantoms of thick “dread” Rise From “open” crypts of “darkness” Where “walking” echoes chant elegies of doom" How can one ever describe a more dreadful night! All the Best in the contest dear Sam. Into my Fave.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2022 10:01:00 AM
Valsa, sending you heartfelt gratitude for your wonderful feedback. I am hoping it will do well. Emile's words were a great jump start as they seemed to create a picture of walking through a dark forest on Halloween night experiencing the creepy and the spooky. So honored by your fave sweet friend! Sending you all the blessings of this amazing season of abundance!
Date: 10/28/2022 3:10:00 PM
night of dread indeed, nicely worded Sam, very spooky! good luck to you in the contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2022 9:54:00 AM
Hi Hat! Thank you so much! I love the "things that go bump in the night" elements of Halloween - spooky and unexplainable. So glad you enjoyed this "haunted" poem. All the best! Blessings!

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