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Night Of Desire

It came into her mind seeing how the wind
Did blow, and sheet rain against the window
There would be no trek into the forest
No.. tonight would be hot

Soft music.. much wild desire will transpire
As we stay inside on this rainy eve
Rain that tip-taps music on the tin roof
Lying in your arms snuggling, secure, love

Never wanting love to end, just when night
Sends tough storm on in, no.. love don't take flight
Just lie and help weather the storm until
It struck her as she wrestled inside__ tore

Life has storms that we must weather... holding 
Onto each other, greatly strengthen the bond forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/4/2010 12:23:00 PM
Just wanted to read your earlier stuff. you are simply an amazing writer. This piece like the others has everything a reader could hope for. Genius!
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Sara. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congrats Sara on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase luv..
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:14:00 PM
Such a meaningful poem, Sara. Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:04:00 AM
SARA, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:25:00 PM
It's the storms that tighten the bond and when we look back we remember the sunshine. Congrats on the feature. Vince
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:43:00 AM
This reminds me of that great old Vaughn Monroe Christmas tune - "Oh the weather outside is frightful ........." Charming. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/18/2010 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on this wonderful poem being featured this week....a gem indeed! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:57:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv... enjoyed my friend...
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Date: 3/24/2010 2:03:00 PM
My kind of night Sara >> James
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:49:00 AM
Very beautiful lines revealing love, emotions, feelings, fear with hopes to fight back the storms. Great thought in simple words my friend. Very well penned. Thanks. Best wishes and Sara Kendrick
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Date: 3/21/2010 4:38:00 PM
A great reason to get stuck inside for the night, Sara. Very lovely! And thanks for your recent comment. Andrea
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Date: 3/20/2010 1:04:00 PM
sounds like a pretty wild night. hang in there. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:25:00 AM
I can pick on my mom if I want to!!(**)
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Date: 3/19/2010 9:17:00 AM
Doris! leave mother alone! she doing just fine.
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Date: 3/19/2010 9:15:00 AM
yes we do. John H Loving III
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:16:00 AM
I agree with Brian, this is one of your best, Sara....what a lovely poem! Romantic and true love spoken. Nicely done....Carrie
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:46:00 AM
One of your best Sara.One for the favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:37:00 PM
A very well written poem. I have enjoyed the read...
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:15:00 PM
So very true, the storms do blow through Smiles
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:02:00 PM
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Date: 3/18/2010 3:18:00 PM
Sounds like a great night to me Sara Daniel
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