Night of Desire

It came into her mind seeing how the wind
Did blow, and sheet rain against the window
There would be no trek into the forest
No.. tonight would be hot chocolate...fire

Soft music.. much wild desire will transpire
As we stay inside on this rainy eve
Rain that tip-taps music on the tin roof
Lying in your arms snuggling, secure, love

Never wanting love to end, just when night
Sends tough storm on in, no.. love don't take flight
Just lie and help weather the storm until
It struck her as she wrestled inside__ tore

Life has storms that we must weather... holding 
Onto each other, greatly strengthen the bond forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Just wanted to read your earlier stuff. you are simply an amazing writer. This piece like the others has everything a reader could hope for. Genius!
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Sara. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Congrats Sara on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase luv..
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November 9, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Such a meaningful poem, Sara. Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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October 21, 2010 at 8:04 AM
SARA, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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October 20, 2010 at 5:25 PM
It's the storms that tighten the bond and when we look back we remember the sunshine. Congrats on the feature. Vince
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sara. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:43 AM
This reminds me of that great old Vaughn Monroe Christmas tune - "Oh the weather outside is frightful ........." Charming. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
Richards Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on this wonderful poem being featured this week....a gem indeed! ~ love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Congrats Sara on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv... enjoyed my friend...
Fraser Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 2:03 PM
My kind of night Sara >> James
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March 22, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Very beautiful lines revealing love, emotions, feelings, fear with hopes to fight back the storms. Great thought in simple words my friend. Very well penned. Thanks. Best wishes and love.........xxx Ravindra...xxx Sara Kendrick
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 4:38 PM
A great reason to get stuck inside for the night, Sara. Very lovely! And thanks for your recent comment. Andrea
Chachere Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 1:04 PM
sounds like a pretty wild night. hang in there. -Always&Forever Lynette
Culverhouse Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:25 AM
I can pick on my mom if I want to!!(**)
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March 19, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Doris! leave mother alone! she doing just fine.
Loving Iii Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 9:15 AM
yes we do. John H Loving III
Richards Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 8:16 AM
I agree with Brian, this is one of your best, Sara....what a lovely poem! Romantic and true love spoken. Nicely done....Carrie
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March 19, 2010 at 12:46 AM
One of your best Sara.One for the favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
A  Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 7:37 PM
A very well written poem. I have enjoyed the read...
White Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 6:15 PM
So very true, the storms do blow through Smiles
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March 18, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Mother!!
Cheeseman Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Sounds like a great night to me Sara Daniel
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