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Night Dread-Word Morph

Night comes and he is filled with fright because eight evenings in a row, great dread he's had to fight while in his bed. He lies now waiting for the morning light. March 11, 2019 for Jesse Rowe's "Word Morph Poem" Contest Hope I did it right!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2019 8:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2019 7:39:00 AM

You did it right, Andrea! LOL Congrats on your win.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/15/2019 4:44:00 PM

lol, it looks right, I had to redo mine several times, it is a fun, somewhat scary read, Andrea, enjoyed it

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/14/2019 9:27:00 AM

I'm thinking, yes - you did write it right. 'ight' was a good pick. Oh, you - you threw in 'right' to match the other lines, didn't you? Color me slow, but big time grinning! Love, CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/14/2019 3:48:00 PM

Ha, the "right" thing was totally unintentional!! but it makes me look clever! someone said something about the word "right" down below and I did not know what he was talking about until you just said this to me.

Joseph May

Date: 3/13/2019 6:39:00 PM

This looks interesting Andrea..looks good to me...Nicely done..Winning wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2019 7:54:00 PM

I haven't checked this contest out yet but it sounds great to me :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/12/2019 7:46:00 PM

Well-done, Andrea! Janice

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2019 7:40:00 PM

Andrea, I like this, I had absolutely no idea what to do, so I did nothing, I want to enjoy writing not get a headache ~

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/14/2019 3:49:00 PM

Dear heart, use the link he provided. That makes it fairly easy.

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/12/2019 9:27:00 AM

Good one. Flows nicely. Short sweet and right to the point.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2019 6:00:00 AM

I think it is more than right, I did not even recognize it as a morph poem, it flows nicely, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2019 4:16:00 AM

The dreaded night fears. Well done Andrea, good luck. Tom

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/12/2019 1:26:00 AM

Well done! Good luck with the contest.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/11/2019 9:06:00 PM

I dread the night for lack of light...and fear the day, for no place to hide. Very well penned! Short but packed with avenues of speculation. I love poetry that doesn't so much as say but opens doors and windows to let imagination in. Great read!

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/11/2019 6:49:00 PM

I like how you morphed into ‘right’ at the end lol. Take care, Richard