Newborn Flowers

A broken heart 
who humbly cries 
As the flames began melting 
tears hidden under the seabed

Sizzling hot a trail 
sparkles into the night sky
love comes in colors 
that kisses burn passion

Following your starlight flooding
memories are forever made pure
Even if you are not here
I can feel your warm breath 

Winking to the soul dream of dreams 
Together we can build a future palace
one without fear and pain
Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow 
 
Catching many rainbow on our roads path
Cupid strikes flying saucers land in your space 
wondering if things will ever be the same again
Captivating an angel strums tugging heartstrings 

Do you hear still the melody 
to the most beautiful song playing
Warmly exploring deeply touching tunes 
Covering the bed with rose petals 

Music plays a heartfelt chant sighs 
I miss you dearest flower forever more 
just like the desert misses rain
Whispers held on a cloud of breath beautiful 


A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
(unrhymed quatrain)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:55 PM
I don't want to sound repetitive, but you two truly merge your words so well together. So pleased to see this one chosen as POTD....congratulations!! // paul
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:37 PM
absolutely beautiful collaboration Anne Lise and Liam congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 18, 2016 at 12:54 PM
BEAUTIFULLLLLLL!!!!!
Raven Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Hi Liam, once again a brilliant collaboration between Anne-Lise and yourself. Belated congratulations on poem of the day. As always your words just flow so well together, never losing their way on the journey. The imagery shines and the emotions flow. You both have such an excellent poetic skill that your pens create beauty with each piece you write together. Excellent work as always Anne-Lise and Liam. May your pens ever run gold. Your Friend always....Vlad. a seven and into my faves....Vlad.
Inman Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Lovely write of loss and loneliness. Well done to both of you.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Great collaborated ,Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid, congratulations on Poem Of The Day Hugs Eve
Manassian Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 8:40 PM
You both love to bring images to life...Congrats on this POTD! Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations to both of you on POTD! This is lovely! #7
Promise Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Great team work. Congratulations on making POTD. Best wishes, RP.
Sergi Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations , Liam on a great bend with Anne Lise. Great POTD
Sergi Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on a great blend with Anne Lise, Liam
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February 9, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Excellent collaboration, both are genius my lovely friends. Loved always,bl
La France Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Liam and Anne Lise, congratulations on Poem of the Day with this beautifully penned poem, enjoy the honor ~
Anderson Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Congrats. Poem of day. Very nice piece.
Anderson Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Yw
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:56 AM
- Thank you, Jimmy :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!Congratulations to you my dearest friend Liam and to you too Anne on POTD!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I' m so very happy n' proud for you both.You sure deserve it.Well done!Just awesome!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:55 AM
- Thank you, Dorian :)
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February 9, 2016 at 4:44 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. !!!!!!!!! -
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 3:00 AM
- Thank you for this beautiful gem, always a pleasure to write with you dear friend Liam - I wish you a lovely new week :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Haikutwinkle Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Love the sentiments in this writing
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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February 7, 2016 at 4:35 PM
A beautiful one is too. Peace and blessings to you both.
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