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Newborn Flowers

A broken heart 
who humbly cries 
As the flames began melting 
tears hidden under the seabed

Sizzling hot a trail 
sparkles into the night sky
love comes in colors 
that kisses burn passion

Following your starlight flooding
memories are forever made pure
Even if you are not here
I can feel your warm breath 

Winking to the soul dream of dreams 
Together we can build a future palace
one without fear and pain
Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow 
 
Catching many rainbow on our roads path
Cupid strikes flying saucers land in your space 
wondering if things will ever be the same again
Captivating an angel strums tugging heartstrings 

Do you hear still the melody 
to the most beautiful song playing
Warmly exploring deeply touching tunes 
Covering the bed with rose petals 

Music plays a heartfelt chant sighs 
I miss you dearest flower forever more 
just like the desert misses rain
Whispers held on a cloud of breath beautiful 


A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
(unrhymed quatrain)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/19/2016 1:55:00 PM
I don't want to sound repetitive, but you two truly merge your words so well together. So pleased to see this one chosen as POTD....congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 2/18/2016 5:37:00 PM
absolutely beautiful collaboration Anne Lise and Liam congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:54:00 PM
BEAUTIFULLLLLLL!!!!!
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Date: 2/11/2016 1:31:00 PM
Hi Liam, once again a brilliant collaboration between Anne-Lise and yourself. Belated congratulations on poem of the day. As always your words just flow so well together, never losing their way on the journey. The imagery shines and the emotions flow. You both have such an excellent poetic skill that your pens create beauty with each piece you write together. Excellent work as always Anne-Lise and Liam. May your pens ever run gold. Your Friend always....Vlad. a seven and into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:53:00 AM
Lovely write of loss and loneliness. Well done to both of you.
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Date: 2/10/2016 12:03:00 AM
Great collaborated ,Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid, congratulations on Poem Of The Day Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/9/2016 10:57:00 PM
Excellent collaboration once again, Liam and Anne-Lise, to craft a beautiful and touching write. Congratulations on the POTD honor. T.J
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:40:00 PM
You both love to bring images to life...Congrats on this POTD! Hugs
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you on POTD! This is lovely! #7
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Date: 2/9/2016 2:03:00 PM
Great team work. Congratulations on making POTD. Best wishes, RP.
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations , Liam on a great bend with Anne Lise. Great POTD
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/9/2016 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on a great blend with Anne Lise, Liam
Date: 2/9/2016 12:32:00 PM
Excellent collaboration, both are genius my lovely friends. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:38:00 AM
Liam and Anne Lise, congratulations on Poem of the Day with this beautifully penned poem, enjoy the honor ~
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Date: 2/9/2016 9:08:00 AM
Congrats. Poem of day. Very nice piece.
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Jimmy Anderson
Date: 2/9/2016 10:14:00 AM
Yw
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 2/9/2016 9:56:00 AM
- Thank you, Jimmy :)
Date: 2/9/2016 8:57:00 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!Congratulations to you my dearest friend Liam and to you too Anne on POTD!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I' m so very happy n' proud for you both.You sure deserve it.Well done!Just awesome!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 2/9/2016 9:55:00 AM
- Thank you, Dorian :)
Date: 2/9/2016 4:44:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. !!!!!!!!! -
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Date: 2/8/2016 3:00:00 AM
- Thank you for this beautiful gem, always a pleasure to write with you dear friend Liam - I wish you a lovely new week :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 8:24:00 PM
Love the sentiments in this writing
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:54:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:35:00 PM
A beautiful one is too. Peace and blessings to you both.
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