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New Day Blessed

The lanterns glint through flames of night when musings dwell, to rise, to soar unto a breeze, in orange-white and with lit murmurs, troubles beseech… soft the prayers as hands implore, one rhapsody like sacred speech. Unyielding, angel wings unfold the rise and ebb of hopeful dreams beneath glazed stars, touching eve’s cold… for human faith opens god’s sky, endowing a new day, agleam as wishes claim heaven’s reply. The lanterns glint through flames of night Unyielding, laced wings unfold. Repost 3/22/2017 New Day Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 4/8/2017 6:08:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your WIN with this brilliant write!! ;-)
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Date: 2/12/2016 2:08:00 PM
Just going back and learning from the Master, I hope you don't mind. I've never written a sonnet before. I'll give it a shot. Beautiful rhyming verses and flows divinely. Thanks for the peek! Peace:)
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:46:00 PM
NETTE, Congrats on your awesome win. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/16/2016 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations for this amazing piece and deserving first win my dear friend, Nette! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:51:00 PM
an amazing win for an amazing write! Big congrats to you, nette.
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:51:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE SO DESERVING OF FIRST PLACE, dear Nette. MANY CONGRATS.
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:49:00 AM
A graceful layer of verses you've penned Nette! Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:33:00 AM
Amazing Cornish Sonnets landed upon this list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:28:00 PM
Awesome win, Nette.... Always----SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:27:00 PM
Wow Nette that work sure sits at the top of the list with due cause. Nicely penned, thanks.
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette! Your unique word pairings are unmistakable, a style all your own.
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:54:00 AM
This is fantastic, Nette. 7+ Congrats on your win! xoxo
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on top podium with this very lovely sonnet nette.. great work!!
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:25:00 PM
Brilliant, nette. I'll wager that your birth certificate is written in Sonnet form, you are a natural at this. Congratulations on a much deserved win. Viv x
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Date: 1/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
Beautiful :-)
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Date: 1/11/2016 4:40:00 PM
So pleased to be back with congratulations on a much deserved win, Nette....first place!! Well done:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/6/2016 4:25:00 PM
It sang through your pen nette golden beautiful piece dear friend
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Date: 1/6/2016 2:25:00 PM
Great job on sonnet, Nette! Enjoyed!!
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:52:00 AM
This is wonderful nette, truly is..happy new year
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:20:00 AM
So lovely this sonnet. Loved the "human faith opens god’s sky". Way to go, Nette! PS. Were you named after the form? :-)
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Date: 1/6/2016 9:21:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:40:00 PM
excellent write Nette...wish you luck in the contest
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:03:00 PM
Full marks to a lovely and creative poem; I love how you tackled this theme, and the rhyming smoothness. ~ Hugs // paul [ps..smail]
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:47:00 PM
Refreshed by your sense of faith and purity of poetry's soul. May new year wrap you with grace!
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:34:00 PM
Supremely quilled!Every which way, you've captured the spirit of hope flaming especially on special, new moments. Hats off!
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