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a new day has dawned my heart croons in pure delight my soul waltzes with joy January 29, 2022 For " Newness Senryu"" Poetry Contest Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com Sponsor: Beata Augustin

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Date: 2/1/2022 12:39:00 AM
O how good to spread joy and song. My poor writing comes from a similar source, but I sing poorly, though not before a Godly audience. ThanX so much for a cepting my live for my ancestral Faith, Vedas, Bharat Desh/ Bhoomi mature. ShalOm
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Anil. Appreciate your comment. I grew up in Bharat Desh - it was great to read your poem about our faith.
Date: 1/31/2022 4:49:00 AM
Lovely senryu. This poem brings a warm delight in this winter season. Best wishes.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/31/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, JCB. Your comments are so inspiring - appreciate.
Date: 1/30/2022 5:04:00 PM
Beautifully uplifting pen.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/30/2022 5:13:00 PM
Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your beautiful comment.
Date: 1/30/2022 8:02:00 AM
Beautiful. i love it. God bless you and Love to you, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/30/2022 5:12:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. Your comment inspired me.
Date: 1/29/2022 10:15:00 PM
I agree with Valsa. Beautiful.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/30/2022 7:45:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 1/29/2022 9:29:00 PM
This is a beautiful Senryu Mala.... All the Best in the Contest !
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/30/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa.
Date: 1/29/2022 4:26:00 PM
Hello Mala, beautifully done. Was that a potted plant? We are still in winter. Love & Friendship Dalene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2022 3:53:00 PM
Hello Mala, that was a lucky guess. Love & Friendship Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/29/2022 4:35:00 PM
Yes, Darlene, that's a potted plant. Love ~ Mala

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