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*Fictional poem for contest*

is affection the only path to love,
is adoration the answer to one’s fate?
after what might have been ended, I see…
sometimes love’s just never enough-
and 
never is a long time without you

so I walk into the foyer and see photo’s
taken with spiteful smiles,
familiar enemies, yet allies near the ones
who would never understand frail hearts-
they could never comprehend how two 
souls vowing forever, not never, under
the autumn cool sun say…
sometimes love’s just never enough

am I weak for believing farewells exist,
do I really feel the pressure of goodbye…

needing what should have been bestowed, 
fearing when safety should be given with 
ease-
fasting for food never nourished,
and emotions never meant to be worn

I sit here and wonder if love really is enough, 
and quaint pale memories of loss flow-
for after what might have been ended, 
I now see…
sometimes love’s just never enough…
and never is forever without you



Silent One
September 8, 2019

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Date: 9/17/2019 3:10:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your win..beautifully penned
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Date: 9/15/2019 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations and blessings. Wonderfully penned
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Date: 9/14/2019 1:01:00 PM
wonderfully penning as always my friend, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/14/2019 3:30:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/14/2019 11:56:00 AM
True words, you did the contest justice..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/14/2019 3:30:00 PM
thank you very much :)-lullooo
Date: 9/10/2019 3:17:00 AM
"so I walk into the foyer and see photo’s taken with spiteful smiles, familiar enemies" This is so telling and compelling, Lu.
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Date: 9/10/2019 9:53:00 AM
it is fiction though, trust me my house is not like this! thank you! :)-luloo