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Never Ever Land

A lady who looked like she'd die Just knocked on our door to say, "Hi!" She wanted to cry But did not know why Then left without saying goodbye . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/5/2022 11:14:00 PM
This is such a cute limerick.... I am sure she has come from Never Ever Land ! :)
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Date: 5/14/2021 8:38:00 AM
Many of us get confused as we grow older, Rico. It's a sad state of affairs. If my friend Jack wasn't taking care of his mother with Alzheimer's, she would be in "Never Ever Land" as well. Thank God, she has him. A very touching verse, Rico. Some of us face the same future as this woman. Hugs, Carolyn
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/14/2021 12:16:00 PM
A fall, or a bump on the head, could make that happen sooner rather than later! Enjoy life whilst you can! Aloha! Rico
Date: 5/12/2021 2:37:00 PM
The poor confused lady! Is this true? Good limerick, Rico! Janice
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:20:00 PM
The die was cast. Heh, heh. :) gw
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Date: 5/11/2021 4:13:00 PM
aww a sad one indeed Rico:-( hugs jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/12/2021 11:08:00 AM
Perhaps once each month I meet a woman in the lift who knows she has a place to live but does not know where as all the floors and doors are the same. She knows the numbers mean something, but not what, so does one help her find her home, leave her to God's Will, or turn her in to the concierge to be moved to a nursing home?
Date: 5/11/2021 11:33:00 AM
I think you should keep an eye on this lady. Sounds like she needs psychiatric help!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/11/2021 11:47:00 AM
She is but one of millions the pandemic has stranded. Aloha! Rico

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