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Never-Ending Love

They met at fourteen years old, he was
shy but she loved his smile
her brother had brought him home 
and he stayed for supper.
Her eyes flirted with him across the table
and he was fascinated . . . 
Oh, she yearned for time alone with him
perhaps to give him a passionate kiss
and to feel that hair that fell across his eye.

He came back again and again
and not because of her brother either.
They would sit together talking
holding hands with adoration and
love blossomed . . . 
Romance soon led to a true love story.

They were my grandparents . . .
No two were ever in love as much
it was heartwarming to see their devotion
and joy in each other . . .
Yes, they married young
and life was not always easy for them
but they worked hard
and had a very happy life
and their love only grew stronger
and stronger as years passed.
They shared their emotions easily.

They were like salt and pepper
like two peas in a pod
so alike and yet each had a spirit
all their own . . . 
Grandpa was such a funny man
always making jokes
and Grandma, well she was so sweet
their love was packed full of love
never-ending . . . 

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April 30, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/Never-ending Love
Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1018-424-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Free Verse on Love
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/5/2018 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance, a well worthy first place. Mick
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Date: 5/5/2018 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your first position win. What a beautiful nostalgic poem.
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Date: 5/4/2018 9:22:00 PM
A beautiful love story. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, BW.
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Date: 5/4/2018 4:29:00 AM
Wow, Constance, this is such a sweet and beautiful love story. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats. John
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Date: 5/4/2018 1:40:00 AM
What can I say, I m truly lost for words, you have written it absolutely beautiful, this is what people call something beyond beautiful, enjoyed every single line of it, how two people meet and fall in love, falling in love is easy but it s staying in love which is difficult, but they stay there whole life together, a really nice piece of poetry, congratulations on your first position, you truly deserve that place, good luck
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Date: 5/3/2018 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance on your fist position win. A great nostalgic poem.
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:57:00 PM
WoW! BW, Your grandparent's love story was so beautiful and romantic. I enjoyed the down to earth vibe and tone of this write. They were fortunate to have found each other. You are a product of their wonderful and epic love story. Well done. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:27:00 PM
You never disappoint...wonderful as usual. Congrats, dear friend.
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:02:00 PM
Wonderful , your description of them is amazing Broken Wings, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/3/2018 5:56:00 PM
congratulations Broken Wings on your win...a very heartfelt touching story...I wish I had known my grand-parents
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Date: 5/3/2018 2:56:00 PM
Such a beautiful story, Constance. You were blessed to have such wonderful grandparents and to be able to share this with us through your lovely, well-written poem. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2018 2:42:00 PM
wow! what a story of truest love!! Beautifully expressed sweet lady! Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 5/1/2018 10:29:00 AM
Precious - just precious!
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:41:00 PM
Sure to top the winner's list, Constance.
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:28:00 PM
Broken Wings, thank you for sharing your grandparents’ story with us. It was truly delightful.
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