Neurostorage

Inside unseen worlds, parallel space exists to collect my daydreams

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 7/18/2009 11:53:00 PM

"Parallel space", excelent way of describing it! It travels along with us and in a way we ar concious of it but it cannot actually interact with us in a material way, yet the universe is much more than something material =D wiii thanks for the experience

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/16/2009 6:36:00 PM

Wow, this is great..I've always wondered where those daydreams went...smile. BG

John Rhinem

Date: 7/16/2009 4:42:00 PM

Smile ~ Hello my dear friend James! This quite an imaginative/potentialy truthful write here....Somehow seeming to stem upon a faith of sorts...."Excellent Food For Thoughts"....Also, I sincerely apprecaite "Your Comments!" And, I shall be making more rounds soon hereafter; to visit the writers whom I truly admire such as "Yourself!" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always to 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Evening," Bye ~

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/16/2009 3:37:00 PM

i love day dreaming. great chingku

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2009 3:05:00 PM

I love daydreaming,infact when i have a problem or am tired i close my eyes and daydream and i feel so good--This cinqku is a beauty and makes me wanna try to write my first Cinqku--great write,always your friend charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2009 3:01:00 PM

Wow....love this!! We all have daydreams, and to think they may actually exist in a parallel world....I love that idea..especially if we can live in that world part of the time! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2009 2:45:00 PM

Spooky having your daydreams collected. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 7/16/2009 2:44:00 PM

Great Cinqku James,..infact, perfect, and alive ! james