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Needing a Fix

Needing a fix She stole my heart and tried to hock it, but the pawn shop wouldn’t give her anything for it because it was broken Feeling bad she tried to give it back, but when she did I stole hers, she still has mine – it’s fixed now

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Paul Dandrea

Date: 5/13/2017 2:10:00 AM

It's spare and blunt and it works. It encourages me to experiment with short lean lines.

Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 8:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Paul. Sometimes it is easy for me to get my thoughts across in short lines and poetry and sometimes not so easy. This was one of those easy times. :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/11/2017 7:00:00 AM

Nice one, Chris. Good it's fixed now :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/11/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Agnes

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/11/2017 5:45:00 AM

Oh after all they are now belongers...Eachother's heart they stole..Two hearts as one has become whole..Its a Match...:)

Chris Green
Date: 5/11/2017 9:51:00 AM

That it is. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/11/2017 3:50:00 AM

Morning Chris. This entry is two folded. I see a side of play with the title and I see and read a side of beauty that lies within your words and entry. And that Chris is the side I stand by for it touches the one who reads. This entry is a gem. Marvelous in every way. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Chris Green
Date: 5/11/2017 9:50:00 AM

Yep, the title was lure. :) Thank you so very much Lisa. Just having a little fun.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/10/2017 9:42:00 PM

So there is now a 'meeting of the hearts' and you feel like one. That was a lovely and fun read Chris:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/11/2017 9:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Marie. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/10/2017 6:28:00 PM

Oh I'm so happy it's fixed now :) hugs, Kina

Chris Green
Date: 5/11/2017 9:49:00 AM

Thank so much my friend. :)