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November 19, 2022
A Fun Holiday Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Mrs. Claus wants to flaunt new bikini, and Mr. Claus ride a Lamborghini, need a vacation away from humdrum chores every day Alas! few pounds to drop to look skinny!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:21:00 PM

congrats on your win. For me, it's a number one!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2023 1:32:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Ooohoo! So glad to know you liked it!

Joseph May

Date: 12/13/2023 1:40:00 PM

St Nick swapped his sleigh for a Lamborghini!, Nicely done Malabika, Congrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2023 1:32:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph. Hope Mr. and Mrs. Claus had a great vacation!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write/picture. Let's go find Santa on the beach. Have a fun day............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2023 1:30:00 PM

Thanks, Paula. Your comment makes me laugh - so probably I wrote a funny poem!

Valsa George

Date: 12/7/2022 8:57:00 PM

This is quite cute ! Seeing your humorous side and enjoying it immensely ! Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/8/2022 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. Sometimes I really want to write funny poems, wonder - am I getting better!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/24/2022 10:45:00 PM

Very interesting, indeed! Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/8/2022 10:04:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj! Limericks are fun!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/24/2022 10:34:00 AM

Mala, very cute, congratulations on your winning placement!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/8/2022 10:04:00 AM

Thank you, Tania. I am honoured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2022 9:59:00 AM

Loving this one again. Congrats, Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/8/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2022 4:21:00 PM

very cute!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/20/2022 5:02:00 PM

Thank you. Limericks are fun!

Jcb Brul

Date: 11/19/2022 4:25:00 PM

So hilarious! I like how you rhyme bikini with Lamborghini. Best wishes in the contest!^___^ JCB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2022 12:24:00 PM

- Santa Claus should have a few extra kilos... :) - I can understand that he needs a little vacation :) - Best wishes in the contest, Mala :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2022 6:13:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. You think, he should have a few extra kilos! Ha ha ha!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/19/2022 7:27:00 AM

I enjoyed this cute poem. Well done :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2022 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi. I am not very experienced in funny poems - decided to give it a try! Glad you enjoyed. Love ~ Mala

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/19/2022 6:55:00 AM

Lol, after all his hard work for the one day of the year he's entitled to a break. Best of luck Mala, good luck in the contest, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2022 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. So glad to receive encouraging comment from Master of Limericks! I am well, Tom. Hope you are fabulous! BW ~ Mala