Nearer My God

Nearer My God (The Band Played On)

"Nearer, My God, to Thee"  played on. . . 
calmly played by eight who stood upon
A sinking deck. That fearless band
Just played at nobody’s command
As if in strange oblivion!

Surely some serenity was drawn 
That night by all those hanging on
To hope and hearing strains so grand. .  .
Nearer my God.

They vanished long before the dawn,
But for those eight, a prize was won.
For though they’d not return to land,
They’d all been strong and selfless and
Would know a better place anon. . . 
Nearer my God.

For Paula Swanon's Contest:
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December 31, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Another rare beauty Andrea... very touching tearjerker full of emotion and lovely lines my friend... now which poem did u write for Gareth? U said on your comment it did not fit criteria ... I think he is looking for a touching goodbye recalling all the moments spent with that person and now some parting words to soothe the pain of leaving .... let me know so I can read it..luv..
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December 30, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Andrea..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
Haick Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Always excellent, dear Andrea! This heartfelt write reminds me so much of "Titanic". Great imagery! Love, Audrey
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December 28, 2010 at 3:22 PM
An awesome write Andrea. Guess I have to make supper so we can head to the show. Will email later. Phyl
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December 27, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Titanic tragedy this, what a wonderful poem, so explicit, so sad. Have a wonderful new year Andrea, and thanks for all your support. Harry
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December 27, 2010 at 4:38 PM
awesome write of wisdom and knowledge
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December 27, 2010 at 2:39 PM
I will never forget that movie, Titanic, the first time I saw it, and that haunting music, those musicians played until the water was touching their shoes "amazing poem" best of luck in the contest
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December 27, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Magnificant write Andrea! The imagery and passion with which you must have felt as you penned this write are evident. Beautiful job... as always! Lay
Neels Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Andrea, me again.. Soupmail for you :)
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December 27, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Very dramatic Andrea ! A grand tribute to those brave souls who thought more of others than their own selves ! Bravo to you for remembering them and enlightening us with their gesture ! And FYI; "Sett: same as lair. Have a happy New year dear poet ! Much love, james
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December 27, 2010 at 7:18 AM
It was a solemn requiem they played, Andrea, and your emotions are well placed in your words ... very befitting the memory.
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December 27, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Andrea;) happy holidays'(Lin~Ra)
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December 27, 2010 at 6:42 AM
The Titanic..So sad an event that should have been a great journey...Good luck in the contest..Your presence at my work was an uplifting moment in time..Sara
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December 27, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Hi Andrea. What a magnificent write. Strikes chords in me on so many levels. As an ex fisherman and seaman the water holds an everlasting hold on my thoughts. As a musician the power and the ability of music to sooth savaged souls is something that I believe in. Thank you for writing this and the very best of luck in the contest. Eamon
Neels Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 1:43 AM
Stunning piece Andrea, good luck for the contest as well.. Love Wilma
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Andrea, Amen. Well done and truly inspiring. Good luck in the contest. Love, Will
Radke Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful and haunting. An incredible tribute to those brave men. The last line, carrying much more meaning than its simple three words for those men, and you have captured this so well... Very good.
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December 26, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Nice images you have drawn Andrea in the Rondeau form.Goodluck in the contest-kashinath
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 3:44 PM
A fantastic and wonderful entry to the contest. Of course I am not quite conversant with the .." Near, My God, to thee" but I can read and interpret what it is. Andrea
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