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Nature Calls -- for contest

Gene went for a dip in the local pool His swimsuit was loose, he thought it was cool Had four beers, he felt mellow Soon Gene turned the pool yellow He’d turn it brown too ~ if he could refuel ~ Entry in 'A Funny Summer Limerick' Contest ~ Sponsor: Tania Kitchin August 01 2024

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Terry Miller

Date: 8/22/2024 1:48:00 AM

Ha Ha, congratulations

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2024 6:56:00 PM

I'm still 'drinking in' the accolades, Terry. lol. Thank you! ~ Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 1:53:00 PM

Haha. Oh my! Congrats on the win

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2024 7:47:00 PM

This one surprised even me, Andrea! Thanks, gw

Valsa George

Date: 8/18/2024 8:47:00 PM

To say the least, he messed up the swimming pool. Thank God, he didn't 'refuel'. Quite hilarious! Congratulations, Gershon on your placement.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2024 7:50:00 PM

Appreciate you noticing, Valsa. And I think I noticed your entry up there in the exclusive first-place club if I'm not mistaken. Huzzah! ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Limerick write. I see, someone was Not taught pool manners. Post a sign "No Swimming Here." Hahaha!!!! Have a fun day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2024 6:58:00 PM

Yes. Miss Manners flushed this guy right down the hole in her water closet! ... Thanks, Paula