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sunrise cradled in autumn golden leaves heaven spirit scene "nature"~ bird's wings fluttering fade scattered light creeps throughout leaves like water in a running stream through rocks~ aroma earthen pure ablaze a crimson, orange sunset wane stars flourish in frail darkness~ beneath nightingales' croon 3/24/2022
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Date: 4/6/2022 12:37:00 PM
loved this, such a gracious flowing of the senses filled with those captured moments that stay within on gentle breezes of ataraxia
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:39:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your beautiful poem ~Constance
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Date: 3/30/2022 3:13:00 PM
oh maybe you put that top part in the separate box. A long time ago you could see the two boxes were separate but now we can't tell it unless you put a line under the first part. I wish they had not changed that feature.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/30/2022 4:22:00 PM
The top was my original poem with three stanzas, but Constance said we could only use one stanza, so I saved it so I can properly post later.
Date: 3/30/2022 3:12:00 PM
so nice how you put it together with that top part. I just don't know how people figure out how to do that, to put fancy font or pictures into this part of the submission!! Congrats on great placement
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/30/2022 4:22:00 PM
I placed my poem on clipart and added the pictures
Date: 3/30/2022 12:01:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win! I adore your first line. Beautiful image of the sunrise being cradled! Oh so creative! Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 3/30/2022 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful Kimo write. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 3/29/2022 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win! Your Kimo is beautiful. I love "sunrise cradled in autumn golden leaves..." I'm facing it.
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Date: 3/29/2022 7:45:00 AM
I love the first line of this wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/28/2022 7:03:00 PM
"heaven spirit scene" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/28/2022 2:05:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. I like your topic nature. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2022 1:06:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/28/2022 12:09:00 PM
Goodness! All you present is gorgeous Eve! Congrats!
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:27:00 AM
I can't wait for the autumn season to return. It has always been my favorite time of the year... And so, this was such a lovely poem to read this afternoon... Keep up the wonderful writing, Eve!
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Date: 3/26/2022 4:14:00 PM
beautifully penned Eve xx
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Date: 3/25/2022 11:39:00 AM
First line is a winner! Well said! Aloha!
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Date: 3/25/2022 5:44:00 AM
Great and very profound thoughts you were able to convey in this poem, Eve. My best wishes for the contest.
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