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Nativity

A young couple plan for their first baby,
                           
they must first take a trip.
                                             
It is winter with warm days~cold night,
           
they need a place to stay.
                               
All rooms have been booked,
                                         
only a stable was available.
                                           
A King was to be born,
                                                   
the animals were listening for the cry.
                             
Angels and his mother sang,
                                           
as the baby slept to the lullabies.
                                   
The three Wise Men saw a star,
                       
now traveling to the town of Bethlehem.
                         
They were bringing the baby gifts,
                                 
gifts of gold, frankincense, and myrrh.
                             
No one knew how this baby would change the world,
       
Jesus our Savior had been born for all to see.
                 
We now have a story to be told,
                                     
shout it for all to hear.
Date Written: 12/18/2021
Honorable Mention
Nativity New Poems Poetry Contest
                               
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 1/20/2022 2:42:00 PM
A sweet retelling of the Christmas story! Congrats on your placement, Paula! Blessings, Kim M
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2022 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you liked my retelling of the story. Have a Blessed Day/Weekend..................
Date: 1/18/2022 8:37:00 PM
A very free-flowing narration of the event. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. I enjoyed writing this Christmas story. Have a Blessed Day.........
Date: 1/18/2022 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Paula , and congratulations on your win. Bless you with a new year with lots of blessings.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2022 10:30:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your Nativity Contest. I enjoyed writing this Christmas story. Have a Blessed Day and Blessed New Year 2022.............................
Date: 12/28/2021 7:46:00 AM
Your heartwarming narrative of Nativity is sublime and grand, Paula. The faith, the love - moves everyone. Best wishes for a blessed New Year. Hugs ~ mala
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/28/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a Blessed New Year 2022 with hugs.......................
Date: 12/22/2021 6:12:00 PM
After reading your poem, I asked Alexa to play Away In The Manger. I was so moved by your poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this Nativity write. "Away In The Manger" is a beautiful song. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/22/2021 4:52:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful and heartwarming, Paula. Best wishes for the contest with this wonderful contender. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/22/2021 10:54:00 AM
Much enjoyed the story you wrote that resonates in the hearts of the faithful. Happy festive season and my very best to you for the new year, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my story. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/22/2021 3:03:00 AM
A lovely narration of the age-old tale of Christ's birth, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my story/writing of Christ's birth. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/21/2021 6:45:00 PM
Beautifully narrated in your inimitable style, Paula! Merry Christmas and have a great year ahead
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my story telling style. It is a "Beautiful" story to tell. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/21/2021 9:39:00 AM
A lovely retelling of the Christmas story Paula. Those three Kings honored Baby Jesus with their finest gifts of their day. To this day these gifts of gold, frankincense and myrrh are still the finest gifts that can be given. The oils having healing properties both spiritually and physically. Blessings to you this holiday season my friend. xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:42:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my retelling of the Christmas Nativity story. Three very special gifts to give. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/21/2021 9:32:00 AM
Lovely Christmas Story. God bless you and yours! Thank you for sharing. Merry Christmas!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my Christmas Nativity story. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/21/2021 8:15:00 AM
Great Christmas writing. Nativity is beautifully said. Best wishes.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my Nativity write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/21/2021 5:18:00 AM
Great and best wishes Feliz Navidad Panagiota
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/21/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. May you have a very lovely Christmas with good heath in 2022. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/20/2021 3:52:00 PM
Paula, your nativity story is a beautiful depiction of the true spirit of the Holiday season. Please have a happy holiday season and a healthy new year ahead of you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/21/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. May you have a very lovely Christmas with good heath in 2022. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
You created the wonderful story of the nativity Paula, the true meaning of christmas. Hope you have a lovely Christmas and good heath in the coming new year. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/20/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my Nativity story/write. May you have a very lovely Christmas with good heath in 2022. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/19/2021 7:07:00 PM
Beautifully written bringing before us the nativity scene in all vividness ! Best of luck in the contest .... Paula !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/20/2021 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your best of luck. Glad you like my Nativity scene/write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/19/2021 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful retelling of the Christmas story, Paula. Good luck in the contest. I'm making this a favorite and I'm following your poetry now! I enjoy your poetry. A poet friend, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. WOW!!! Did I see you say, favorite this and you are also following me??? You made my day. Thanks A million. Glad you like my writes. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/19/2021 3:37:00 AM
A lovely Christmas verse, taking us to the crib where it all began...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/18/2021 1:00:00 PM
They brought him a few meagre gifts and He gave us the biggest gift all the day he died, for you and I and the entire world. Well penned and heart felt Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my Nativity story. A great gift for the world. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Date: 12/18/2021 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed your story. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/19/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my story. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

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