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Nan

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust Absentmindedly, Jackie wrote her name thereupon, watching as dust motes floated upwards, caught in sunset's evening rays Brushing away a tear, she turned around surveying, Nan's neglected room provoked, a vague feeling of emptiness Psychically, Jackie, quite distinctly heard "The war years seemed like only yesterday" It was her Nan's voice. Jackie gasped aloud "Nan, is that you"? "I'm sure it was your voice" Materialising in the doorway Was, the slight figure of her darling Nan Dressed for bed carrying a lit candle Aghast, Jackie stood rooted to the spot The candle sputtered, spent and all was dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/2/2020 5:43:00 PM
Marvelous little ghost tale. I wonder if it really could have happened!! I see it won a contest too. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:38:00 PM
Great story telling Theresa. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
Wow!! Well done. Congratulations on placing in these well written poems.
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:34:00 PM
such haunting imagery Theresa very well penned; Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Theresa, on your placement with this poem of haunting imagery. Well done!
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 5/2/2018 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Susan for reading and your lovely comment xxxx
Date: 5/2/2018 7:32:00 AM
Congrats, Theresa on this well penned piece.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 5/2/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Line for reading and for your kind commenting xxxx

Book: Shattered Sighs