Nan

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
Absentmindedly, Jackie wrote her name
thereupon, watching as dust motes floated
upwards, caught in sunset's evening rays
Brushing away a tear, she turned around
surveying, Nan's neglected room
provoked, a vague feeling of emptiness
Psychically, Jackie, quite distinctly heard
"The war years seemed like only yesterday"
It was her Nan's voice. Jackie gasped aloud
"Nan, is that you"? "I'm sure it was your voice"
Materialising in the doorway
Was, the slight figure of her darling Nan
Dressed for bed carrying a lit candle
Aghast, Jackie stood rooted to the spot
The candle sputtered, spent and all was dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Marvelous little ghost tale. I wonder if it really could have happened!! I see it won a contest too. Congratulations.
George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Great story telling Theresa. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Wow!! Well done. Congratulations on placing in these well written poems.
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:34 PM
such haunting imagery Theresa very well penned; Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations, Theresa, on your placement with this poem of haunting imagery. Well done!
Stephens Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Susan for reading and your lovely comment xxxx
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Congrats, Theresa on this well penned piece.
Stephens Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Line for reading and for your kind commenting xxxx
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