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My Winter

Huddled over that old black radio waiting for the final announcement School canceled tomorrow! Bedtime? We actually have to SLEEP? Where am I? Is that light coming from... No-No! Don't look out the window! Then-how-what-when-where? Oh me oh my, the door, the front door Some has swept up onto the porch And the steps, the steps! Breathe a deep, icy breath first Go ahead now, look on out and note how everything is smothered, smothered, muffled and quieted by the blanket that covers all, covers all but the perfect silence Breath another deep, icy breath Go ahead now, step on out Step out in the yard and note dainty, delicate bird tracks And rabbit footprints too? (How DARE they get here first?) Fence posts measure how much Wearing comical, tilted hats Pesky sprinkles of sleet tease and tickle my nose Like a magical wide-awake dream, familiar yet so unfamiliar A brand-spanking new kingdom of white custom recreated just for me Oh, you BAD little boy! Will you again tromp out and ruin Mother Nature's picture of perfection and forever scar this eternal moment? Oh yes, I believe you will Hurry! Get dressed! Now GO

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/15/2017 9:20:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Tim - blessings to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 11/29/2017 3:05:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Tim, and I loved when they would cancel school because of the weather . congratulations on this deep, icy breath write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/29/2017 12:43:00 PM
Tim, I love your delightful poem and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/29/2017 8:27:00 AM
Good winter. Congrats.
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Date: 11/29/2017 6:18:00 AM
This is awesome :) Congratulations on your top win! Let it snow!
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Date: 11/29/2017 2:08:00 AM
Well done on your 1st place, Tim, hugely enjoyable and thanks for entering my contest. Regards, Viv
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 11/29/2017 5:00:00 AM
Thanks Viv! It's a true honor
Date: 11/25/2015 5:48:00 PM
This was a delightful write, Tim! Great work! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:17:00 PM
Your playful approach to this contest was fun to read Tim. Many are having snow already before Thanksgiving, while we are having rain here in a white out. It is headed west and should arrive to greet the west coast in three days now. So if in the east, expect more snow and rainstorms. Congrats on your win Tim. I enjoyed your poem!
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Date: 11/21/2015 4:15:00 AM
This was such a fun read, Tim. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:52:00 AM
Lovely to read this again Tim congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:08:00 AM
How lovely Tim .. congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:01:00 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Tim.
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:04:00 PM
Tim, this is REALLY good stuff. You are at your top form with this one. FAVE
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:31:00 PM
Makes me glad I live in Texas! :-) .. Congrats on a great win, my friend!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:56:00 PM
Well crafted write on winter's end, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:28:00 PM
Oh I think we can all relate to this - i work in a school and listen avidly to the radio in case the forecast is bad - is it going to be closed - now work can go and enjoy the fun in the snow then lol - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:20:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
You perfectly described the magic of a snowfall. And yes, one must get out in it to fully enjoy.
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Date: 8/19/2014 12:09:00 PM
Oh Tim...this reminds me of my childhood in Tehran...We lived at the foot of the Elbruz mountain range. It would snow deep enough for my brothers to jump off the roof into the snow. I was a scardy cat. Oh...the beauty of that first snow...The hushed silence...the cold...and powdery beauty of it all. Thank you for this trip back to my childhood. You wrote with magic tonight...or...today for you! ;)
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