My Winter

Huddled over that old black radio
waiting for the final announcement
School canceled tomorrow!
Bedtime? We actually have to SLEEP?

Where am I? Is that light coming from...
No-No! Don't look out the window!
Then-how-what-when-where?
Oh me oh my, the door, the front door

Some has swept up onto the porch
And the steps, the steps!
Breathe a deep, icy breath first
Go ahead now, look on out and note
how everything is smothered,
smothered, muffled and quieted
by the blanket that covers all,
covers all but the perfect silence

Breath another deep, icy breath
Go ahead now, step on out
Step out in the yard and note
dainty, delicate bird tracks
And rabbit footprints too?
(How DARE they get here first?)

Fence posts measure how much
Wearing comical, tilted hats 
Pesky sprinkles of sleet
tease and tickle my nose

Like a magical wide-awake dream,
familiar yet so unfamiliar
A brand-spanking new kingdom of white
custom recreated just for me

Oh, you BAD little boy!
Will you again tromp out and ruin
Mother Nature's picture of perfection
and forever scar this eternal moment?

Oh yes, I believe you will
Hurry! Get dressed! Now GO
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Barden Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:20 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Tim - blessings to you, friend! :-)
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Wonderful imagery, Tim, and I loved when they would cancel school because of the weather . congratulations on this deep, icy breath write. Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Tim, I love your delightful poem and congratulations on your win!
Johnson Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Good winter. Congrats.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 6:18 AM
This is awesome :) Congratulations on your top win! Let it snow!
Wigley Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 2:08 AM
Well done on your 1st place, Tim, hugely enjoyable and thanks for entering my contest. Regards, Viv
Ryerson Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Thanks Viv! It's a true honor
Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 5:48 PM
This was a delightful write, Tim! Great work! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Your playful approach to this contest was fun to read Tim. Many are having snow already before Thanksgiving, while we are having rain here in a white out. It is headed west and should arrive to greet the west coast in three days now. So if in the east, expect more snow and rainstorms. Congrats on your win Tim. I enjoyed your poem!
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 4:15 AM
This was such a fun read, Tim. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:52 AM
Lovely to read this again Tim congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:08 AM
How lovely Tim .. congrats on awesome win!
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Congratulations on your win Tim.
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Tim, this is REALLY good stuff. You are at your top form with this one. FAVE
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Makes me glad I live in Texas! :-) .. Congrats on a great win, my friend!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Well crafted write on winter's end, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Oh I think we can all relate to this - i work in a school and listen avidly to the radio in case the forecast is bad - is it going to be closed - now work can go and enjoy the fun in the snow then lol - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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January 17, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Tim, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Sirak Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM
You perfectly described the magic of a snowfall. And yes, one must get out in it to fully enjoy.
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August 19, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Oh Tim...this reminds me of my childhood in Tehran...We lived at the foot of the Elbruz mountain range. It would snow deep enough for my brothers to jump off the roof into the snow. I was a scardy cat. Oh...the beauty of that first snow...The hushed silence...the cold...and powdery beauty of it all. Thank you for this trip back to my childhood. You wrote with magic tonight...or...today for you! ;)
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