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empty nesting box blue **** have vanished from sight sparrows eyed their home I’ve not seen the pair of blue **** recently, it seems that some sparrows had been vying for the nest box – they are too big to go through the hole but it seems they’ve scared the nesting birds birds away 4/30/18

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Lyric Man

Date: 5/14/2018 1:41:00 PM

Sorry

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2018 4:47:00 PM

thanks Chance yes I agree, we need a fund to save Jan's tits from disappearing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell

Date: 5/12/2018 9:21:00 AM

great title to get lots of hits lol

Jan Allison
Date: 5/12/2018 10:59:00 AM

The first poem was called 'I've got Blue Tits' - it got Poem of the Day lol:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/3/2018 1:54:00 AM

You had me worried, Jan- I was going to say that's what happens to my goolies when I swim in the North sea :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2018 2:04:00 AM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/2/2018 10:50:00 PM

Jan, you're just too much sometimes!...Makes me proud to be an empty-nester ( I guess ? ) LOL! gw

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2018 1:24:00 AM

I actually wrote a poem yesterday about being an empty- nester, I am so so so proud of my son, I must post it one day. Hugs jan xx

FJ Thomas

Date: 5/1/2018 4:41:00 PM

-.- really??? Your tits??? I knew you weren't old enough for what the title suggested!! ;p

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 4:46:00 PM

lol you know me Flo I can't resist a titillating title:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/1/2018 10:13:00 AM

Aww, sorry for the little birds, Jan. maybe they found better accommodations xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 12:56:00 PM

It was a brand new box in 2016 and they would have been the first occupants. I hope it does eventually bring the flutter of tiny wings:-) hugs jan xx

Tahira Parveen

Date: 5/1/2018 9:34:00 AM

So sad when this happens, maybe some others will move in... Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 12:55:00 PM

I hope another pair take up residence:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

Date: 4/30/2018 11:44:00 PM

Fantastical Haiku dear poet ! Your title to this write was daring and luring *sm.....Hope you get a chance to read my write titled, "Her little tits"

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 3:15:00 AM

I'll drop by James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau
Date: 4/30/2018 11:47:00 PM

P.S...the write "Her little tits" is only 15 writes ago *winks

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 4/30/2018 3:00:00 PM

Bluebirds were everywhere when I was a boy. Now they are rarely seen. Next to the cardinals, they were the easiest birds to spot. As for my poem, yes, Jan, I also start a poem with the last line and work backwards. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 3:13:00 AM

The old box was used every year but suffered with the weather and had to be taken down, this new one has been vacant for 2 years so I was delighted when they started nesting. I see fewer birds bees and butterflies these days:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2018 1:44:00 PM

- Sad news, Jan - Maybe they will return - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 3:11:00 AM

I hope so Anne-Lise. I was so excited at the box being used for the first time in 2 years:-( hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 4/30/2018 12:59:00 PM

now you're blue and they aren't.....

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2018 1:27:00 PM

so true John I love watching the birds in the garden - just hope they try again another year:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/30/2018 10:55:00 AM

Awww that's so sad. There are bullies in all species.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2018 11:05:00 AM

You are so right Lin:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/30/2018 9:56:00 AM

Aghh that's a Shame Jan, It's not a nice thing when bigger birds scare off the smaller ones, laws of the jungle I suppose. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2018 11:04:00 AM

Hubby saw the sparrows around the box and they were trying to get in but the hole is too small but I think it scared the little birds away:-( hugs Jan xx