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When random thoughts are bombarding a mind, Cohesiveness among them is hard to find. Metaphors and symbols just like in one’s dreams, Even what is seen, is not what it seems. One must not resist, just let the thoughts flow. Look for the patterns and see what they show. They show the direction, but rarely the conclusion, There isn’t much reason, just a form of illusion. Give the thoughts time, as they slowly congeal, Attaching to each other, a story they tell. Flow with the words, give them a chance, Let them move together like partners as they dance. Look for the thread, their intertwined relation, Patiently seek their vague explanation. Look for the message the words are revealing. What are the metaphors and symbols are concealing? Ask, to what in my life do these things refer? Is their truth in the manner in which they occur? Or is it the way the thoughts make one feel? Sometimes combining to create an ordeal. If one is patient, the answers will come. Sometimes their clarity may make one feel dumb. Once the answer is seen, it seems so clear, It makes one feel silly to have ever felt fear. Most of our worries will never come true, But we’ll still have fears as our thoughts come through. Our dreams try to help us to better understand, We don’t have to be perfect, just the best that we can.

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Date: 12/8/2023 5:50:00 PM
What a profound and meaningful write this is dear bill, I absolutely love the flow of this and you are right let thoughts out never suppress. And i read in a book called “ secret” once, be careful with your thoughts, because thoughts too become things. I love the ending the most in this but every line in this emanates wisdom and truth that we can all grasp and ponder upon and use in our daily lives too. I really enjoyed the rhymes, you do rhyme so seamlessly. Pleasure reading this. Another fave
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Date: 12/8/2023 6:10:00 PM
Thanks for the comments and the FAV, Ink. Sara and I read, "The Secret" book. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/8/2023 8:01:00 AM
You are both very wise and very talented my friend. So true, that most of our worries may never come true.
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:30:00 PM
I heard that 90% never come true. Those are bad odds to be investing so much of our time and energy into, especially when it a negative outcome we're fretting over. Thanks for the comments, Jerry. Have a nice day, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/7/2023 3:08:00 PM
outstanding rhyme poem, hubby. You've said some pretty wise things as you let your thoughts flow on the page. The metaphors and symbols in dreams do help us try to better understand. Like you said, patience is the key...the answers to questions come. Magnificent job, Bill. Wish I could fave this one...hugs, me
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:10:00 PM
You're my favorite! So, I'll count it! Thanks for the comments, Sara. You're the best! Hubby Bill
Date: 12/7/2023 1:03:00 PM
Patience is key because sometimes those thoughts are not what we thought they were and we might be pleasantly surprised. Let them flow and our patience will be rewarded. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:12:00 PM
I agree, Tom. Like with people, be slow to judge. Sometimes they turn out much better than first impression would suggest. Have a good evening, my friend, Bill
Date: 12/7/2023 10:53:00 AM
Nice poem on ongoing thoughts i mind. Well penned.
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:14:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Jay. Just rambling a bit. Have a good evening, Bill
Date: 12/7/2023 10:16:00 AM
Hello My poet friend, What is said in this poem is so true. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my poet friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hello Bill What was said is so true. My poet friend enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:15:00 PM
Thanks for the FAV, my friend. :-) Hugs, Bill
Date: 12/7/2023 10:04:00 AM
Bill, each verse is cohesively related to each other, and I totally agree with your synopsis. It's like cooking a pot of gumbo, let it simmer and the flavors will blend more deliciously. Patience is the key to cooking and so many other aspects in life.
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:17:00 PM
I agree, especially when cooking, there's always a best time to take it out of the oven or off of the burner. Thanks for the visit and comments, Lin. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill

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