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My Sweet Sweet Sunshine

Yellow dreams of scintilla held ever tight filling distant fields hidden out of sight morning mist moves across the meadow and sounds of a new day come alive Hints of light rise from a darkened sky parts of me arise, shown sparks in my eye others just wait, still on a cloud covered day begging for her warmth to forever stay

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Date: 3/24/2017 9:14:00 AM
Make the most of it, and enjoy.
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:58:00 AM
This is so refreshing, Tim:) a 7 for the sunshine you've spread with this sweet poem:)
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Date: 3/21/2017 10:31:00 AM
I like to lift my head with my eyes closed, and feel this on my skin. I want some of that bright light and take it with me for a while :)
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:37:00 AM
Im sure our Sunshine souper loved this..Well deserving tribute to a wonderful lady.Here comes the Sun...Lovely.
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:47:00 AM
It's not a tribute to the Souper but the big ball of love in the sky
Date: 3/21/2017 4:22:00 AM
Morning Tim. What a most beautiful and gentle way to start the morning. May your sweet sweet sunshine forever stay for you and for all. This was a pleasure to read this little gem. Well done
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:07:00 PM
This is gorgeous Tim :-) ...rays of warmth and light to banish winter blues into oblivion! Happy Spring :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:37:00 PM
It is the first day of Spring - more sunlight on the way :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 7:27:00 PM
This is beautiful Tim. I love it. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/20/2017 5:35:00 PM
Lovely, Tim. It warms the heart.
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Date: 3/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
Oh how beautiful.....Sweet is the Sun!
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:35:00 PM
She's shining bright here today. I hope she comes to visit you soon. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:13:00 PM
So nice Tim. I can see and feel the warm sunshine :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:01:00 PM
- Beautiful sunshine poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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