Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

My Sweet Sweet Sunshine

Yellow dreams of scintilla held ever tight
filling distant fields hidden out of sight
morning mist moves across the meadow
and sounds of a new day come alive

Hints of light rise from a darkened sky
parts of me arise, shown sparks in my eye
others just wait, still on a cloud covered day
begging for her warmth to forever stay

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Scott Thirtyseven March 24, 2017 at 9:14 AM Make the most of it, and enjoy.

Joanna Daniel March 22, 2017 at 9:58 AM This is so refreshing, Tim:) a 7 for the sunshine you've spread with this sweet poem:)

Darren White March 21, 2017 at 10:31 AM I like to lift my head with my eyes closed, and feel this on my skin. I want some of that bright light and take it with me for a while :)

Charmaine Chircop March 21, 2017 at 6:37 AM Im sure our Sunshine souper loved this..Well deserving tribute to a wonderful lady.Here comes the Sun...Lovely. Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 6:47 AM It's not a tribute to the Souper but the big ball of love in the sky

Lisa Ricci March 21, 2017 at 4:22 AM Morning Tim. What a most beautiful and gentle way to start the morning. May your sweet sweet sunshine forever stay for you and for all. This was a pleasure to read this little gem. Well done

Lynn Marie March 20, 2017 at 9:07 PM This is gorgeous Tim :-) ...rays of warmth and light to banish winter blues into oblivion! Happy Spring :-) blessings, lynn

Sara Ella March 20, 2017 at 8:37 PM It is the first day of Spring - more sunlight on the way :)

Judy Ball March 20, 2017 at 7:27 PM This is beautiful Tim. I love it. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Eileen Manassian March 20, 2017 at 5:35 PM Lovely, Tim. It warms the heart.

Paulette Calasibetta March 20, 2017 at 4:31 PM Oh how beautiful.....Sweet is the Sun!

Chris Green March 20, 2017 at 3:35 PM She's shining bright here today. I hope she comes to visit you soon. Nicely done my friend.

Heidi Sands March 20, 2017 at 3:13 PM So nice Tim. I can see and feel the warm sunshine :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 3:01 PM - Beautiful sunshine poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)