My Sweet Felicity - POTD

I had three daughters and I loved them all.
And they knew I had the biggest soft spot 
For Felicity, the middle one.   Her grace followed
Everywhere and everyone in the village knew.
Her golden yellow tress, her fluttering eyebrows,
Her small upturned nose enhanced the small sweet lips.
And she was always laughing, affecting everyone.

She found a job in a children's paediatric hospital.
Children were her love and she would attend to them
As often as time permitted, leaving her to laugh,
Echoing in the corridors, by far a favourite of all.

One thing she never missed.  The service was on Sunday.
In the end, by permission, she would sing her hymn.
Many came to hear her angelic mellifluous voice.
She always chose "Amazing Grace".  Soft notes that came from the heart
And rising to a crescendo.  No one was allowed to clap.
Her final words were always the same.
You come to adore God.  Praise His Holy Name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/26/2023 1:30:00 PM
Victor back again to congratulate you on this loving poem of your precious daughter. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
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Date: 6/25/2023 10:59:00 PM
Late Congratulations on POTD Victor for a very beautiful poem about your daughter Felicity! I didn't know you had three daughters! Debx
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Date: 6/25/2023 2:47:00 PM
hey congrats on the POTD, my friend!!! this is sure one of your most popular poems
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Date: 6/25/2023 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I have written another poem which I want to check first but this one will not be as popular.
Date: 6/25/2023 12:37:00 PM
I am sure that it's a hard job, caring for kids in the hospital; one sees so much potential and suffering, at the same time. I think Felicity needed her spiritual time to get through her days at the hospital; a lovely pen for her. Congratulations on POTD with this one.
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Date: 6/25/2023 9:54:00 AM
Back. I saw this POTD coming and so many Congratulations, Victor….do celebrate the honors. Panagiota
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Date: 6/24/2023 6:35:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner. I knew it was a great one. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:50:00 PM
Oh wow! An absolutely sublime poem, Victor! A POTD too! Well deserved ~ :)
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Date: 6/23/2023 10:39:00 PM
Amazing Grace was my Grandads favourite song. A lovely poem and tribute. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 6/23/2023 9:41:00 PM
Hi Victor, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Enjoy your honor !
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Date: 6/23/2023 9:08:00 PM
Victor this is so heartfelt and beautiful. You have been blessed my friend with your Daughter Felicity and your other daughters. I am sure your love is great for all of them and if not there are reasons that are painful. I want to congratulate you on this great Honor of POTD and wish you many wonderful years with your beloved Daughters. God bless you Victor...
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Date: 6/23/2023 5:19:00 PM
Dear Victor, your words are so beautiful and uplifting. Such a lovely dedication to all your daughters, especially Felicity. I can feel the love in your heart, my dear sweet friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/23/2023 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful ! Congratulations on your POTD! :) Paulette
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Date: 6/23/2023 3:15:00 PM
Truly beautiful Victor. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/23/2023 3:06:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on POTD honors, my friend. :)
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Date: 6/23/2023 2:14:00 PM
So beautiful Victor. Its so easy to picture Feliciity by your wonderful description. Congratulations on a POTD well deserved.
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Date: 6/23/2023 1:01:00 PM
What a wonderful portrait od your daughter. I feel as though I know her. And a stunning name, to booot. Heartfelt Congratulations. May your heart beat with joyful honors Pamagiota
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Date: 6/23/2023 1:00:00 PM
Truly amazing poetry my friend. You have a smart and wonderful daughter. Verses show she has been raised so well. A fav... God bless..
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Date: 6/23/2023 12:14:00 PM
she sounds amazing Victor, you are blessed that she is your daughter :) congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:52:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A heavenly write/story. Have a blessed day..........
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:24:00 AM
Hello Victor, Congratulations. This is a lovely poem about your daughter. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Victor Buhagiar! A lovely tribute to a middle daughter.
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Date: 6/23/2023 11:19:00 AM
Hi Victor what a sentimental beautiful poem and I am so happy for you that you got POTD and deservedly so, Congratulations and God Bless. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/23/2023 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/23/2023 8:56:00 AM
Lovely write on your daughter, Victor, congratulations on POTD:)
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