Ts Poetry Poet Free verse

My Story

there's not too much to tell of this story
no hero, no clown,
disaster nor frown
no gallows, no rope
just living of life
with sunshine, with hope

barefoot walks on storm drenched beaches
where worries up and wash away
I watch with real attention
noticing

each flicker, each moment
kissing a thousand waves
caressing the fatal flux
of visceral phenomena

it's beautiful

enamored in the iridescent
the blue
falling off the horizon

the world is flat

shells open
then float
alone in the depths of her sea

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Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2022 at 11:18 AM A well deserved Poem of the Day. Very unique and creative with the imagery.

Constance La France October 24, 2022 at 4:32 AM TS, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessins

Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2022 at 5:55 PM Every life has a story! Congratulations on POTD!

Anisha Dutta October 23, 2022 at 10:18 AM Nicely composed . Congrats.

Gordon Mcconnell October 23, 2022 at 8:58 AM Great pen TS, with nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too, congratulations on being the POTD too. Blessings,Gordon

Valsa George October 23, 2022 at 12:05 AM Though your life is not pompous or eventful, you seem to enjoy every moment of your life. The poem creates a sense of peace and well being ! Really enjoyed, dear friend. Congratulations on your POTD

Ts Poetry October 22, 2022 at 8:30 PM Thank you everyone for all the kind comments

Eve Roper October 22, 2022 at 6:59 PM Enjoyed reading, love the feel and imagery you created. Congratulations on POTD.

Bj Legros Kelley October 22, 2022 at 6:07 PM Such peace and beauty! Wonderful POTD that washed over me with awesome visuals! Congratulations on this well-deserved POTD honor! ~BJ

Brandy Nicole October 22, 2022 at 5:45 PM "It's beautiful, each moment kissing a thousand waves." Yes, in so many ways. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe, and my heart is fluttering. Congratulations TS, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Janice Canerdy October 22, 2022 at 5:00 PM Those simple, free experiences really ARE the best. A poem well deserving of the title POTD. Janice

Lady Labyrinth October 22, 2022 at 2:58 PM A close shave. Clean cut. No stubble. Nil-by-mouth. A perfect POTD.

Susan Lawrence October 22, 2022 at 12:38 PM TS, Just beautiful and so lulling and inviting in its nuances ! Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)

Jim Slaughter October 22, 2022 at 10:29 AM The first stanza, TS, is a biography in itself. Congrats on POTD.

I Am Anaya October 22, 2022 at 10:24 AM Faving it! :).(:

Panagiota Romios October 22, 2022 at 9:06 AM TS,,congratulations. As you can see, more than ONE poet faved this, ))) not one, Great to see you receive this award! You are the one who wrote it! You get all the celebration for a job well done. FAVING a poem is small potatoes compared to authorship. Many huggs, Pangie

I Am Anaya October 22, 2022 at 8:48 AM Congratulations on POTD TS Poetry! Your story is filled with gratitude, even if the world is a flat one!

Unseeking Seeker October 22, 2022 at 6:39 AM Beautiful thoughts, power of simplicity, mindfulness, purity ~ congrats on POTD

Mike Gentile October 22, 2022 at 6:22 AM Congratulations on your POTD honors! This elegant, thought provoking piece is wonderful to read!!

Bill Baker October 22, 2022 at 6:07 AM Congratulations on your POTD, TS. I enjoyed the flow of your thoughts as you walked, observing and experience each moment and feeling the change as it flowed over you as your awareness turned you mind the beauty and gratitude. Enjoy your special day! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler October 22, 2022 at 5:33 AM Living in the moment without human drama. The world is flat. Lovely all the way around. Congratulations on your honor of POTD! :)

Jenna Logan October 22, 2022 at 5:02 AM Another read. Another sigh. I hope my faving of your lines will bring more comments to the tender thoughts within them as potd.

Jeff Kyser October 22, 2022 at 4:58 AM I like the opening stanza in particular. No drama, sets up for being a keen observer in the moment. Enjoyed! Congrats on the potd

David Kavanagh October 22, 2022 at 4:04 AM Tom is probably on holiday TS, he’s usually well up by now, with the good news for poets, So let me be the 1st to say Congratulations on a quiet beautifully raw POTD, visceral phenomena doesn’t get much more powerful than your story, cheers David

Panagiota Romios October 22, 2022 at 2:17 AM TS ~ an outstanding poem and a Favorite for me.it has a haunting beauty about it, did you know that? It’s loaded with fantabulous lines. I better read you more often and get back on track. “Just living life, with sunshine and hope” Amazing line,TS! I love simplicity in poets. That line moved me.Abd thanks for reading me Thank you…Huggs, Pangie

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