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there's not too much to tell of this story no hero, no clown, disaster nor frown no gallows, no rope just living of life with sunshine, with hope barefoot walks on storm drenched beaches where worries up and wash away I watch with real attention noticing each flicker, each moment kissing a thousand waves caressing the fatal flux of visceral phenomena it's beautiful enamored in the iridescent the blue falling off the horizon the world is flat shells open then float alone in the depths of her sea

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Date: 10/29/2022 11:18:00 AM
A well deserved Poem of the Day. Very unique and creative with the imagery.
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Date: 10/24/2022 4:32:00 AM
TS, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessins
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Date: 10/23/2022 5:55:00 PM
Every life has a story! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/23/2022 10:18:00 AM
Nicely composed . Congrats.
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Date: 10/23/2022 8:58:00 AM
Great pen TS, with nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too, congratulations on being the POTD too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/23/2022 12:05:00 AM
Though your life is not pompous or eventful, you seem to enjoy every moment of your life. The poem creates a sense of peace and well being ! Really enjoyed, dear friend. Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 10/22/2022 8:30:00 PM
Thank you everyone for all the kind comments
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Date: 10/22/2022 6:59:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, love the feel and imagery you created. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 10/22/2022 6:07:00 PM
Such peace and beauty! Wonderful POTD that washed over me with awesome visuals! Congratulations on this well-deserved POTD honor! ~BJ
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:45:00 PM
"It's beautiful, each moment kissing a thousand waves." Yes, in so many ways. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe, and my heart is fluttering. Congratulations TS, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:00:00 PM
Those simple, free experiences really ARE the best. A poem well deserving of the title POTD. Janice
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Date: 10/22/2022 2:58:00 PM
A close shave. Clean cut. No stubble. Nil-by-mouth. A perfect POTD.
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Date: 10/22/2022 12:38:00 PM
TS, Just beautiful and so lulling and inviting in its nuances ! Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
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Date: 10/22/2022 10:29:00 AM
The first stanza, TS, is a biography in itself. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 10/22/2022 10:24:00 AM
Faving it! :).(:
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Date: 10/22/2022 9:06:00 AM
TS,,congratulations. As you can see, more than ONE poet faved this, ))) not one, Great to see you receive this award! You are the one who wrote it! You get all the celebration for a job well done. FAVING a poem is small potatoes compared to authorship. Many huggs, Pangie
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Date: 10/22/2022 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD TS Poetry! Your story is filled with gratitude, even if the world is a flat one!
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Date: 10/22/2022 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts, power of simplicity, mindfulness, purity ~ congrats on POTD
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Date: 10/22/2022 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honors! This elegant, thought provoking piece is wonderful to read!!
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Date: 10/22/2022 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, TS. I enjoyed the flow of your thoughts as you walked, observing and experience each moment and feeling the change as it flowed over you as your awareness turned you mind the beauty and gratitude. Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:33:00 AM
Living in the moment without human drama. The world is flat. Lovely all the way around. Congratulations on your honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:02:00 AM
Another read. Another sigh. I hope my faving of your lines will bring more comments to the tender thoughts within them as potd.
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Date: 10/22/2022 4:58:00 AM
I like the opening stanza in particular. No drama, sets up for being a keen observer in the moment. Enjoyed! Congrats on the potd
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Date: 10/22/2022 4:04:00 AM
Tom is probably on holiday TS, he’s usually well up by now, with the good news for poets, So let me be the 1st to say Congratulations on a quiet beautifully raw POTD, visceral phenomena doesn’t get much more powerful than your story, cheers David
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Date: 10/22/2022 2:17:00 AM
TS ~ an outstanding poem and a Favorite for me.it has a haunting beauty about it, did you know that? It’s loaded with fantabulous lines. I better read you more often and get back on track. “Just living life, with sunshine and hope” Amazing line,TS! I love simplicity in poets. That line moved me.Abd thanks for reading me Thank you…Huggs, Pangie
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