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You’re just an dirty old man
today you dared to touch my hair
To be honest I find you repulsive
of my feelings you are unaware

You make me feel uncomfortable
how I wish you wouldn’t stare
Just get it into your thick skull...
you will never see me bare!

11/17/19

McWhirtle Me Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Charles Messina

It’s been cathartic to write this today, over recent weeks I’ve getting unwanted attention from a minging old man at a social club we go to. Today he touched my hair  ...he makes me feel very uncomfortable

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Date: 11/29/2019 4:28:00 PM
Jan! Way to go with the poem, but I hope that creep leaves you alone!
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:48:00 PM
That's creepy! Great job!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/18/2019 5:10:00 PM
its horrid Natalyn, I will be wearing my hair up whenever we go to the club and avoid him like the plague:-( makes me feel so uncomfy:-(hugs jan xx
Date: 11/17/2019 1:40:00 PM
oh my, it's even based a bit on real life for you. Way to make a poem of it. I am checking out examples of this form. Gotta try to WRITE today!!!
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natalyn hobbs
Date: 11/18/2019 3:48:00 PM
Seriously!? That is creepy!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 3:02:00 PM
He;s been creeping me out for a while now Andrea, told me a few months ago I looked more sexy with my hair down ... so next time we went to the club i deliberately wore it up. this time it was down and he was obviously happy - well from now on it will be up - if he says anything I'll say I'm having a hot flush ... hopefully that will stop him lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/17/2019 1:31:00 PM
Do you think I'd stoop as low as Donald Trump or something?! Perish the thought! I stop at a woman's hair! ~ Joe Biden (LOL).
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 3:00:00 PM
ha ha ha GW I wouldnt believe a word that comes out of a politician's mouth ... and as for our Prince Andrew ... there is a story there and where the truth lies we will never find out:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/17/2019 8:10:00 AM
You could whack him upside the head but then you'd get sued... And he'd probably win. Sigh
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 10:17:00 AM
lol Tommy, I am taking every step I can to avoid any contact with him next time we go to the club and I will wear my hair up cos he doesn't like it like that!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/17/2019 6:01:00 AM
I've felt like this too. Great write, Jan. Love and prayers for you, Gina
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 10:17:00 AM
it makes you feel so uncomfortable:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/17/2019 5:35:00 AM
What a creep, should keep his grubby paws to himself Jan. Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 10:19:00 AM
I am taking steps to avoid any contact with him in the future, we will sit behind him so he can't look at me unless I'm dancing :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2019 10:24:00 PM
Yuck -whack him... just go head and rearrange his chicklets, Jan! And if that doesn't work, hit him with your mcwhirtle. LOL
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 10:19:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2019 7:50:00 PM
Hi Jan, This is a good piece for the contest. I hate to hear that it's true. If this happened to me I would feel they same way. He finds you attractive but that no excuse for his behavior. Best wishes in the contest- Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 6:21:00 AM
Yes been eying me up for months, makes comments about me looking sexier with my hair down, so next time I deliberately wore it up, but this time it was loose, he makes my skin crawl:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2019 7:47:00 PM
lol good poem Jan. I`m sure it will place well in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2019 6:22:00 AM
Thanks greg:-) hugs Jan xx