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You’re just an dirty old man today you dared to touch my hair To be honest I find you repulsive of my feelings you are unaware You make me feel uncomfortable how I wish you wouldn’t stare Just get it into your thick skull... you will never see me bare! 11/17/19 McWhirtle Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina It’s been cathartic to write this today, over recent weeks I’ve getting unwanted attention from a minging old man at a social club we go to. Today he touched my hair ...he makes me feel very uncomfortable

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 6:10:00 PM

Jan, how have things progressed with the dirty old man. I stopped by to congratulate you here and to try to spur you on to get your muse in action. Merry Xmas again, my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 2:03:00 PM

I've not been to the club recently and the last time we went for the pre Christmas party I managed to avoid any contact with him:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/24/2019 4:36:00 PM

Know how you feel, Jan. There's a guy in our neighborhood, when I walk, if he's in the yard, he has to stop me and talk. Last Easter, he put his hands on my shoulders and wished me a Happy Easter in my face. Since then, I stay on a route that avoids his house. Great piece, congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 2:02:00 PM

It's most un - nerving isn't it, sorry you've experienced a similar thing Reason:-( hope you had a lovely time over ther festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 9:33:00 AM

Sorry to hear of this incident that happened with you and that nuisance of a man. Love the write though. Congratulations on your win, Jan. Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 2:01:00 PM

Thanks Charlie I managed to avoid any contact with him at my last visit to the club - I was wearing my santa dress thankfully he didn't ask me to sit on his knee lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2019 1:40:00 PM

oh my, it's even based a bit on real life for you. Way to make a poem of it. I am checking out examples of this form. Gotta try to WRITE today!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 3:02:00 PM

He;s been creeping me out for a while now Andrea, told me a few months ago I looked more sexy with my hair down ... so next time we went to the club i deliberately wore it up. this time it was down and he was obviously happy - well from now on it will be up - if he says anything I'll say I'm having a hot flush ... hopefully that will stop him lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/17/2019 1:31:00 PM

Do you think I'd stoop as low as Donald Trump or something?! Perish the thought! I stop at a woman's hair! ~ Joe Biden (LOL).

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 3:00:00 PM

ha ha ha GW I wouldnt believe a word that comes out of a politician's mouth ... and as for our Prince Andrew ... there is a story there and where the truth lies we will never find out:-( hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/17/2019 6:01:00 AM

I've felt like this too. Great write, Jan. Love and prayers for you, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 10:17:00 AM

it makes you feel so uncomfortable:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/17/2019 5:35:00 AM

What a creep, should keep his grubby paws to himself Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 10:19:00 AM

I am taking steps to avoid any contact with him in the future, we will sit behind him so he can't look at me unless I'm dancing :-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/16/2019 10:24:00 PM

Yuck -whack him... just go head and rearrange his chicklets, Jan! And if that doesn't work, hit him with your mcwhirtle. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 10:19:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/16/2019 7:50:00 PM

Hi Jan, This is a good piece for the contest. I hate to hear that it's true. If this happened to me I would feel they same way. He finds you attractive but that no excuse for his behavior. Best wishes in the contest- Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 6:21:00 AM

Yes been eying me up for months, makes comments about me looking sexier with my hair down, so next time I deliberately wore it up, but this time it was loose, he makes my skin crawl:-( hugs Jan xx

Na Na

Date: 11/16/2019 7:47:00 PM

lol good poem Jan. I`m sure it will place well in the contest. Thanks for sharing

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2019 6:22:00 AM

Thanks greg:-) hugs Jan xx