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MY SOUL'S WINGS

MY SOUL’S WINGS


My soul,
Its wings yearns to stretch
For
To soar high on eternity’s silver cloud
But
Human suffering, tied keeps her, 
On
Reality’s unhappy ground!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
      14 JUNE 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/14/2013 1:37:00 PM
Hi Demtrios so cool to be back and reading this just affirms what I have been missing, thanks for your comments, take care my friend, al the best poetowen
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Date: 6/14/2013 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Owen, so happy to see you back!
Date: 6/14/2013 12:26:00 PM
Hi; I agree with you 100%. My Soul's wings are keeping me down too. Many blessings always...... Lucilla
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Date: 6/14/2013 1:57:00 PM
Dear Lucy, you were missed! Hope all will be fine with you! God bless you my dear and keep you healthy! Thank you very much for your visit!
Date: 6/14/2013 11:47:00 AM
My dearest Demetrios. did you try meditation? The people who does it says they feel an immense happiness and feel free. I love to do it but my mind is most of the time race back or forward. Your soul should be in the poetry world eternally!
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:56:00 AM
My dearest, I have taught it in the past! When we write something sometimes we put ourselves in someone else's shoes to help! Thank you for your comment!
Date: 6/14/2013 11:42:00 AM
a poetic gem that seizes a melancholic yet beautiful thought... how engaging and delightful, D... greeat work!..:)
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:59:00 AM
Well, my dear, life has both sides! No-one, if he loves his fellow man, can be truly happy if others suffer! Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it!
Date: 6/14/2013 11:30:00 AM
Your quest is beautiful and true. SuZ
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thank you my dear. You so kind!
Date: 6/14/2013 7:34:00 AM
This is a profound piece, fortunately Christ will bring heaven to Earth and you will no longer be on unhappy ground.
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Date: 6/14/2013 8:47:00 AM
Richard my friend, how happy am I to she your precious comment! Thank you!
Date: 6/14/2013 7:15:00 AM
It is the ethernal distance between our ideals and crude reality. Very effective in few words
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Mario for your comment!
Date: 6/14/2013 5:58:00 AM
Oh....I wish I could be the wings beneath your winds, my dear poet. You do need to fly! ;) Filakia
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:20:00 AM
Always a dear friend uplifts the other to reach heights unimaginable! Thank you! Filika!