My Sister's Apparition

My parents often spoke of a twin
A sister who had died during birth
Strange hollowness always felt within
In teen years I doubted my self worth

Too shy to interact with my peers
On prom night I drove to Crystal Lake
Streaming down my face were lonely tears
This half of a whole whose legs did shake

From the edge of the bridge I looked down
A fifty-foot plunge, I’d surely die
But beside me in my reflection I found
A pleading form I could not defy

It was my twin, fully grown like me
For the first time I was free of pain
And though she disappeared suddenly
I have never felt lonely again




Written for the Ghost contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Callus Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Hi Diane...just delving a bit into your past poems. This is an excellent write with a great subject to it. Ghostly...but the final is heartwarming. (Is this based on pure imagination, or is there some truth in it?) // paul
Roberts Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 12:04 PM
spooky! congrats on your win in the contest
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Eerie! well done write and powerful imagery! Congrad's Light & Love
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:52 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Diane : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Diane. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 9:29 PM
A ghost story with a very nice ending! congratulations on your fine win.
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:04 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, Diane
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:57 PM
A lovely ghost tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Congrats Diane on your awesome win in the Ghosts contest with this wonderful write.. an awesome and intriguing entry luv..
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Congrats...a lovely story...BG
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June 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Dear Diane, congratulations on taking third place in the Ghost contest. Jack and I both loved your entry. We judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:14 PM
Very very touchy and moving expressions of remembrances of the past, Diane
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June 17, 2011 at 3:16 PM
WOw this gave me chillls... excellent write!!! always Michael
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