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My Sister Love - Collaboration

Not a day since you left me sister- does my h e a r t not WEEP a thousand sorrows, oh, sister love my TEARS could fill an ocean blue. I stand at your T O M B and wonder of what could have been, and recall how PEACEFUL you were in r e p o s e , hands in prayer, rosy lips and cheeks, oh how BEAUTIFUL! Perfectly lovely except you were quite dead, QUITE dead . . . Neither, from the deepest S H A D O W S in my SOUL , sister- can I silence the sweet sound of your voice, how I wish to s i n g with you songs of J O Y that I so affectionately remember as I whisper at your grave. Sister dear, I smile FORLORN and l o n e l y with faded m e m o r i e s of you and I return to haunting vivid thoughts. W E were but children when you went away . . . As I brush the vines from the stone I wonder, sister- would Y O U do the same if it were ME lying there, so C L O S E we were when we were young. The moss on your tomb is soft in the morning mist; it reminds me of your s k i n when last I TOUCHED you, s m o o t h and c o o l as your head lay tenderly on that small pillow. oh, beautiful d r e a m e r do you dream of me in heaven above . . . And when my days on this EARTH end sister- will you be there at the golden g a t e to welcome me home, and take my HAND in yours just like you used to. Can we s t r o l l heaven's gardens together, and sit side-by-side on the grass w h i s p e r i n g silly secrets . . . I touch your name ENGRAVED deep into the cold stone, and my heart b l e e d s again and again, each time . . . _____________________ July 5, 2017 Poetry/Verse/My Sister Love Copyright Protected, ID 07-9181-22-05 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France In Collaboration with James Inman Written for the Standard Collaboration Contest sponsor, Jan Allison07, Judged/2017 Second Place

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Date: 3/13/2018 7:22:00 PM
Love this collaboration. I read it on his page so I had to come find it on your poems & your win with it too :) fav poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:20:00 AM
Debbie, thank for visiting. Yes this was a beautiful collaboration with James, he was able to match my style so well, it is hard to see when I begin and he ends
Date: 11/16/2017 8:59:00 AM
A poignant write...Congrats to both of you on a fine win
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 11/15/2017 1:48:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine
Date: 11/15/2017 11:47:00 AM
Many congrats Constance and James - I was very surprised to see your name as the style is so similar to LuLoo with the use of capitals and i thought it was her poem! many congrats on your win:-0 hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:22:00 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the contest and our great won. Yes Laura and I write very similiar
Date: 11/15/2017 10:25:00 AM
BW, I was honored to be included in your beautiful poem. Thank you for allowing me to join you.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:23:00 AM
James and thank you for your talent . I will write with you anytime
Date: 7/11/2017 9:58:00 PM
BW, thank you for inviting me to join you on this wonderful adventure. Your lovely poems have always been a favorite of mine and it has been a pleasure writing with you.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/11/2017 7:48:00 PM
yes, indeed, you two made a beautiful poem together, Constance. Way to go!! and to your amazing partner as well.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, yes we made a beautiful writing team
Date: 7/6/2017 9:46:00 AM
This is dark and so wonderful that I couldn't distinguish your work from your partner's :) well written, both of you :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:25:00 AM
No thank you for the wonderful yes we were pretty seamless
Date: 7/6/2017 8:19:00 AM
Your paths crossed at the right junctures for you combined verses. Well done, both of you.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:46:00 AM
Lol thank you so much
Date: 7/5/2017 7:40:00 PM
Such sadness, so well done, congratulations BW and best wishes..
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:47:00 AM
Charlie thank you, yes so beautifully sad
Date: 7/5/2017 6:39:00 PM
So tender! I lost my baby sister in 2008. She's playing her piano in heaven.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:48:00 AM
Sun, so sorry for your loss .I know this pain so well
Date: 7/5/2017 4:53:00 PM
This is beautiful and full of emotion, keep going! I can relate to this as well
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:48:00 AM
Heidi thanks you for the beautiful

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