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These are my most loved shoes of all, They let me do the things I like To do for fun in my spare time: They let me walk, and climb and hike. The heavy leather hiking boots For serious mountains, scree, loose rocks And snow (my most expensive ones) Require slightly thicker socks. My lightweight mesh side walking shoes For forest trails and desert sands, I love their comfort, and I wear Them weekly here in local lands. My well worn sandals made by Keen For wading streams are getting holes From being used all summertime. Worn down to nothing are the soles. The climbing shoes that tightly pinch So I can step on tiny edge Have rubber soles that keep me stuck By friction on a narrow ledge. August 28, 2016 For contest: My Shoes

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Date: 7/17/2018 4:11:00 PM
Nice shoe collection for the active woman who likes to have fun! Well done, Agnes.
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Date: 9/2/2016 6:58:00 PM
This is enjoyable work - what is "scree" Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/2/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Matthew. Scree is lose rocks on a mountain slope. They can be different sizes, sometimes they roll or slide under your feel, sometimes they are larger and you have to step from rock to rock. Nasty terrain that requires good ankle support and sturdy soles.
Date: 8/30/2016 7:59:00 PM
Amazing shoes you have, Agnes! I enjoyed reading the descriptive tribute to your wonderful shoes! Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/30/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Yes, my shoes are pretty cool - even if they're not fashionable :)
Date: 8/30/2016 11:09:00 AM
I'd read previous comments that you love hiking and climbing so I really enjoyed a poem based on your footwear collection:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 8/30/2016 8:57:00 AM
Your shoes certainly take you to adventurous places. Well done and congratulations, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/30/2016 11:03:00 AM
they do indeed - thanks, Lin.
Date: 8/30/2016 8:04:00 AM
Congrats Agnes, for having your piece placed in the contest!! :-)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/30/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy.
Date: 8/29/2016 4:27:00 PM
Your fun shoes serve you well, Agnes. Enjoyed this delightfully flowing poem. Hope it does well in the contest. Regards // paul
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Paul.
Date: 8/29/2016 4:47:00 AM
- Good shoes for your feet is important - a great poem, Agnes - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise

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