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My Shadow Muse

The fast beat of Lindsey Stirling’s track - ‘Shadows’ - aptly describes what all poets would be familiar with. Sit back and prepare yourself for a fast trip down poetry lane to the beat of Lindsey Stirling's fiddle. Music starts 0:04
There are days -- and -- days -- when she lags behind Then - there are days and days - when she’s so hard to find
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She needs to be found To run far ahead My poetic prowess lies not in my head My Muse dwells in my shadow instead Favors position where she leads - I'm led Sometimes she’s fast - then she’s slow Sometimes sensual - then demure Sometimes she’s cold - Sometimes she’s hot Sometimes she’s there - then she’s not Reach for the ideas, reach for the pen Reach for a rhyme word - start over again There are days - when she’s so far ahead Oh Lord give me wings not feet of lead
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Ideas flow fast on these days Minds so clear - not in a haze Trips off the tongue, soars like a dove Skirts round Lust, goes for the Love Skies so blue, clouds so white In velvet black the stars so bright Go for the bees, reach for the sting Sully a name - go out on a wing Fly like a butterfly, chirp like a bird Look for a metaphor - look for a word My poetic prowess lies not in my head My Muse dwells in my shadow instead Go for a metre, go for the beat Poetic justice is no mean feat Do syllable counts check the grammar? Go for the funny or romantic glamour
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Let the ink flow, my shadow in sight Skirt the darkness, go for the light Ideas flow fast- swift on these days Mind so clear- not in a haze She’s running so fast Now ten lengths ahead Ideas come streaming, She’s doing in my head Time for a breather, Need to slow down Relief in the smiles Wipe off the frown My poetic prowess lies not in my head My Muse dwells in my shadow instead My confidence is high, my elation extreme My shadow runs free- reigns supreme Together we soar, together we dream….. PHEW! .…That’s left me breathless You dance on ahead - I’m having a rest
Synopsis : When fancy takes her she’s into my head She utters no words just pictures instead She beams in ideas at the speed of light So fast do they come I can hardly write

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/14/2018 8:48:00 AM
Still lovin this one!!!
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Date: 2/8/2018 2:00:00 PM
A wonderful description of a muse with an amazing flow Maria. I enjoy listening to Stirling frequently. Transcendence and Shatter Me being two I favor ;)
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Date: 10/30/2017 8:39:00 PM
Oh Maria, what a poetic extravaganza this is! Your poem is so magnificent and brilliantly written in a uptempo rhythm and the performance by Lindsey Stirling is breathtaking. I love your poetic prowess and Lindsey's music and dance moves and together you've combined for quite a beautiful artistic poetic performance piece. Love the fantastic imagery in your synopsis So very creative and absolutely enjoyed!!!
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Date: 11/3/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, I really appreciate your wonderful comments, coming from an extraordinary poet like you, I am very flattered....Maria xx
Date: 7/12/2017 9:24:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Date: 7/13/2017 12:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Funom, so glad that you liked this fun one...Maria
Date: 7/6/2017 1:46:00 AM
I loved the whole package.... What a talented shadow? Mine just linger behind me.....
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:34:00 AM
What a shame your shadow lingers behind you Pashang . thanks for your visit and lovely comment...Maria
Date: 7/5/2017 3:50:00 PM
Excellent...the whole package! Well done and highly rated for creativity. Take your time to post your next poem, Maria...the anticipation of what's coming next is worth the wait! The beat and rhythm have left me pleasantly breathless! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Paul, yes please be my guest and take a breather, you're allowed. Now that I've discovered where my Muse lies, the poems might be coming in thick and fast.I have no control now...Maria
Date: 7/5/2017 7:40:00 AM
Dear Maria, WOW !!! 7= Not enough! My best to you! chuck
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Chuck. Wow what a great rating. I will see you on your page soon...Maria
Date: 7/3/2017 7:01:00 PM
Oh, I love this, the music the dancing, the words. Wow :) My Gone Fishing poem was made up :)
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Date: 7/4/2017 11:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Debbie. So glad that you liked this fun piece.I loved your Gone Fishing, it was so real, it brought back good memories...Maria
Date: 7/2/2017 3:19:00 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/2/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Ravi, both for your visit and excellent comment. So glad that you liked it...Maria
Date: 7/1/2017 9:27:00 AM
Pure creative genius this poem be, Maria. You excel in rhythm w/your muse. Fantastic Richter scale 10 ... your earthy words got my poetic tongue quaking. Instant fave and a POTY nominee. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 7/2/2017 10:27:00 PM
Now this coming from such a brilliant poet such as yourself ,hearing your words is poetry to the ears. Poetic tongue quaking..Love it. Thanks Freddie for your visit, deeply appreciate it. Maria
Date: 6/30/2017 11:07:00 AM
Maria Maria Maria. You are amazing and marvelous. What a treat you give us reader with your whimsical words and yes with the attached video and music. Everything is so well executed. This is well thought out and presented. You are very talented. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done entirely and completely.
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:24:00 AM
Lisa Lisa Lisa, hello and welcome back. How refreshing to see you my friend . As usual I deeply appreciate your lovely comments and what PS has to offer with wonderful poets like you. How wonderful that you like this poem, it was a bit of fun for me, something I think every poet goes through, Thanks Lisa for stopping by.xxx
Date: 6/30/2017 2:54:00 AM
I keep coming back because I love it :) <3
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Date: 6/30/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Darren. I love that you love it...Maria
Date: 6/28/2017 11:01:00 PM
This is a fabulous piece of work, Maria. I enjoyed it thoroughly. 7+
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Afzal. I'm so glad that you liked it. Thanks also for the high rating, much appreciated...Maria
Date: 6/28/2017 3:38:00 AM
Wowza!! That was SO awesome, Maria! An absolute deliight reading you tonight!
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Date: 6/28/2017 5:09:00 AM
'Oh wolf of white - Your visit was a delight, Thanks for visiting my page tonight' - Much appreciated...Maria
Date: 6/27/2017 9:00:00 AM
Fantabulous! Maria...only the shadow knows...great choreography between video and verse...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/28/2017 5:11:00 AM
It all lies in the Shadow WW. So glad that you got a chuckle out of this, and appreciate your visit and comments...Maria
Date: 6/27/2017 1:46:00 AM
Wonderful Maria, you surpassed yourself here :) Isn't that music lovely to play with and get inspiration from? Really really great, I enjoy this!
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Darren. Thanks for your continued support always, I really appreciate it my dear friend...Maria
Date: 6/26/2017 10:25:00 PM
Our muse can bring us ideas swiftly or never show up..Love the musical aspect of the shadow
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph. So glad that you liked it...Maria
Date: 6/26/2017 5:03:00 PM
P.S. I hope you don't mind this little critique: I think you need to take the "s" off of give(s) in the 1st verse; also, change "temo" to "tempo"; lastly: put a comma after the word "metaphor". Just a few suggestions. Otherwise, it looks great. Carole
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Date: 6/26/2017 4:59:00 PM
Wonderful description of the creative process and how it can take hold of you and cause those juices to flow. And, I loved the music, dancing, and violin. Great video. Perfect addition to this unique poem.
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:08:00 AM
Carole, thanks so much for pointing that out, I fixed it up. Isnt Lindsey Sterling the most versatile and gifted violinist? The inspiration as always comes from the music first. So glad that you liked it. I really appreciate your visit and great reviews,
Date: 6/26/2017 2:32:00 PM
- Impressive and great work, Maria ... everything fits perfectly ... Really a piece of artwork ... a WoooW, poem !!! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:10:00 AM
As always Anne Lise I really appreciate your great comments and visit my dear friend, thank you...Maria xxx
Date: 6/26/2017 9:14:00 AM
I humbly bow before your poetic melody dearest Maria! This is a superbly written poem that your soul, mind and body have created! Hope this to be POTD, POTW and everything other honor offered!
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:19:00 AM
Demetrios my dear friend, that is the greatest honor coming from such a gifted, and inspirational poet. Thanks so much and I'm so glad that you liked this humble offering of mine.
Date: 6/26/2017 7:18:00 AM
Wow my friend, that was so cool. The poem and the music meld together as one, I could hear this being read as part of the performance on that video. There are so many good lines in this I don't think I could pick out one that stood out more than another. This was fun, whimsical and definitely breath taking. A beautiful exhibition of the arts Maria.
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Chris, As always I really appreciate and value your astute comments. I have added in two lines in the first part and made some minor corrections to it. Seems to gel better now....Maria
Date: 6/26/2017 7:18:00 AM
This is great Maria! Very creative and fun. I am sure many will relate to this. I hope you caught your breath ! lol. The video was a fun watch too. :) Have a nice day.
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi both for the visit and lovely comments. Yes I certainly caught my breath , till she appears again and starts beaming images. lol...Maria

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