Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Acrostic

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M y eyes see what your heart is feeling
Y our feelings you write out as poetry

P ain, love, joy, wonder, inspiration
O nly you can help me see, hear,and feel you
E ven though only words you have written they
T ouch my heart and mind deeply from within
R equiring me to write a poem so full of feeling as
Y ou become my poetry I write from my heart
S mile, laugh, cry, whisper, or shout
O pen your heart, mind, and soul
U tter your words on paper or screen
P oetry is where I see and feel your soul

Tons of comma fun!
contest of Russell Sivey

Written by: Carol Brown
01/31/2012
3rd Place Winner

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Margaret Bonnette August 7, 2014 at 1:29 AM Hey, Carol, it's been a long time since I wrote anything on here. I've now got several new ones as of 8/7/14. I love this one, absolutely clever!

Cyprian Duruaku May 8, 2012 at 7:43 AM you are just too good !!

Terry L. Allen April 10, 2012 at 7:12 AM True to form and tells us what your concept of poetic life is. Thank you so much for your kind welcome and for reviewing my poem Awe Shucks.

Shirley Long February 14, 2012 at 7:40 PM Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it. And I am enjoying reading all the rest of your poems also.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 14, 2012 at 5:35 AM Thank you

Samual Ronthorpe February 13, 2012 at 8:18 AM Awesome acrostic, Carol. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 12, 2012 at 9:20 PM I particularly enjoyed line "E" and how you ended it by using "THEY" to continue on into line "T". With me, it is the little things that make poetry enjoyable.

Marycile Beer February 12, 2012 at 7:30 PM Very well written, Carol. God Bless and thanks for your kind words on my poem "Peace." Happy Valentine's Day, Cile

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:14 AM CAROL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

Joyce Johnson February 11, 2012 at 11:50 AM Great poem and win Carol. Congratulations. Thank you for your many comments. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor February 11, 2012 at 8:13 AM Congrats, Carol. Outstanding acrostic. Really enjoyed. Great job. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2012 at 5:22 PM I know that I have read this one before but my comment is not here..Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading again this eve..Sara

Adrienne Gresham February 8, 2012 at 5:49 PM Very good writing, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest

Harry Horsman February 5, 2012 at 3:53 AM beautiful Carol, a joy to read. good luck in contest. harry

James Rasmusson February 4, 2012 at 7:52 AM Carol, thanks for the lovely words you said in the context of my "Tunnel of Trees" poem. The wonders of life, many of which we enjoy here in Michigan, inspire many a poet, myself included. I really like your acrostic (above). You're a huge asset to the Soup community, ~Jim MeanderthalMan

Robert Ball February 4, 2012 at 4:36 AM My first poem that I've read on my return thank you for that one, love the way you pennned it, God bless you in your writtings always, tremendous gift that the Lord has bestowed on your life, God bless Robert

Cyndi Macmillan February 2, 2012 at 7:29 PM I think this should place high, Carol. Love how you made this an acrostic. Cyndi

Gwendolen Song February 2, 2012 at 3:13 PM IS your AVATAR a pic a hydrangeas??..I love those flowers!! You tackled this contest with finesse dear Carol.. Most unique entry ever!! Russell will enjoy how you poured out your poetry heart! ps..Throw in an extra line after the Y in P O E T R Y..it will have a better effect. Love ya and hope u are feeling better each day..Gwendolen

Patrick Cornwall February 1, 2012 at 9:47 PM love it carol... thanks for always stopping in to see me... I love Poetry Soup... so glad I listened and became premium member.. xoxo Patrick

Ravindra K Kapoor February 1, 2012 at 8:35 PM This Poem is a true reflection of Poet's mind and heart, which form shapes and figures with the thrill of joy and grief, sorrow and pain dipped with the melody of love and sometimes hatred. But those, who write to inspire others like you really deserves our love beyond words. Great write from your seasoned and wonderful pen and thank you for your kind and precious comments on Pearl like Tears. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra……Carol Brown

Poet Destroyer A February 1, 2012 at 8:21 PM Carol... nice..nice.. but, my soul is empty... and right now.. i'm in wonder... but, smiling at the wonderful job you did..,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.

Elizabeth Wesley February 1, 2012 at 6:14 PM Just great Carol, all ther best in the contest.

John Freeman February 1, 2012 at 5:41 PM Nice work Carol, hope you are doing well. The best to you in your endeavors. Agape, Moses

Daver Austin February 1, 2012 at 2:33 PM Good for you, Carol. I too love poetry soup, Love, daver

Chronicle Arcadia February 1, 2012 at 2:20 PM Nice poem Carol

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