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I believe good poetry, Is easy on the mind; Not hard to understand at all, No hidden fruits to find. No words so big you'd have to use, A college dictionary, To understand what I have writ, Or ask some visionary, To explain the meanings, Hidden in the words. To try to be too "artsy", Would make me look absurd. I talk about my life and loves. My opinions I unfurl; The things that lift my spirit, And what makes me want to hurl. I want my poems to be fun, And interesting to read; To be nourishing and wholesome, The mind and spirit feed. I want them to be easily read; No confusing drivel. My words are plainly spoken, 'Cause I've no time for riddles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/8/2016 8:50:00 AM
Exactly so, Judy. I believe all art is there to be enjoyed, which means easy to read. I don't like art/poetry that has to be 'interpreted'. I just move on.
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/8/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Barry. I agree. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/8/2016 2:05:00 AM
Reading your poem is like looking in a mirror Judy! - this is exactly how I feel about my writing style - When I first started posting i was bullied by one person here for my 'simple style' and I almost left as I thought my poems were worthless but I stayed strong and I know I would not have got through the last 3 years if I hadn't started writing:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/8/2016 7:22:00 AM
Oh Jan, Your poems are not worthless. I love the way you express yourself. Any time I am helping a new writer I always tell them the first thing to remember is never to let ANYONE talk you into changing what you already know is good and says what you want it to say. Thank you for dropping in to read for me. Your feedback is important to me. God Bless, JB

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