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My Parental Response To Rumi

If you desire wealth Go and make some money Don't let yourself be poor If you desire peace Become a diplomat Don't let yourself fight If you desire love Make yourself loveable Don't let yourself hate If you desire wisdom Go and experience life Don't let yourself be ignorant If you desire healing Get some pills from the doctor Don't let yourself listen to Rumi 26th November 2016                                                       "If you desire healing,                                                        let yourself fall ill                                                        let yourself fall ill."                                                        -  Jalaluddin Rumi (Entry to "Respond to Rumi" contest)

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Date: 12/2/2016 12:26:00 AM
I love this interpretation of the quote, so many different solutions in just three lines. Good luck in the contest!
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Mark Martin
Date: 12/2/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thanks Darren!
Date: 11/27/2016 3:49:00 PM
I'll be getting mine up sometime this week. I already have six other poems on standby. Just like to space them out!!
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Date: 11/28/2016 12:40:00 AM
Not a bad approach. I tend to post mine too quickly and end up tweaking words and phrases later.
Date: 11/27/2016 10:31:00 AM
I like this straightforward and more practical advice!! I took RUmi in such a deep way, I came up with a really weird poem (not posted yet. ugggg)
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Mark Martin
Date: 11/27/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Bit of a strange quote - can be taken in so many ways with so many perspectives. I look forward to reading your entry! :-)

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