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My Own Way

Along this season’s mid quarter-time, I find myself wandering between The raw of night’s wanton pleasure And the sacredness from morn awakened: Late evenings replay a dancing fire when each hour blazes thrilled adventures daring the self to run with passion: jazz music gyrating through city lanes, sauvignon kisses from love’s rendezvous, the late communion with this artist's brush—an expressionistic glow! Yet, as dawn arrives, I turn to my inner home, One that cradles incense of prayers and reflections , Allowing breaths to inhale the pain and beauty Of loved ones now beyond my physical reach… Then to bask in serenity where my Capricorn air Meets the dew of grasses whistling in my yard. I am stilled… Perhaps, I am getting old enough To scrape my pen amidst a bundle of journals, Unearthed by many passages still to come. And go. The Poet's Own for Greg Barden's Contest 8/29/2017

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Date: 9/22/2017 5:46:00 PM
I love this so - a fav for me.
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Date: 9/21/2017 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations Nette. Beautiful write
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Date: 9/20/2017 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in the Poet's Own contest my friend. Sorry, I forgot to reply sooner... A truly exceptional poem you entered! I enjoyed reading such a gem. God bless, Robert
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your placement.
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Date: 9/18/2017 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this exceptional write. AS ALWAYS.
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Date: 9/18/2017 4:14:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL, congratulations Nette
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:50:00 PM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:02:00 AM
This is just gorgeous, Nette, and such a wonderfully-creative and sublimely phrased write ... love it! Thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:39:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, I read a lot of introspection in this poem, very sweet!
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:10:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/29/2017 12:40:00 PM
One of your best... Love it all. Inner home, and the way you set off those last two words really keeps the tone. Hope you are doing well. So glad I read this one... hugggs
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Date: 8/29/2017 11:53:00 AM
This is Russell's wife typing in for Russell. He told me to stop by and read to him your poem. He then commented, "Wow Nette, this is an incredible and fantastic write. You have masterfully crafted another creative and wondrous poem. I surely loved every syllable of your delightful piece, you have outdone yourself with this one. I am mending Nette after my accident. I hope to get better soon enough so I can get back on full time. So good to hear your work, great job." wow, Emma :)
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Date: 8/29/2017 11:44:00 AM
Lovely description of so many emotions--good luck for the contest!
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Date: 8/29/2017 10:55:00 AM
This is so nice Nette and I can certainly relate to it too. Well written. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/29/2017 10:32:00 AM
A tranquility seeps from your words nette
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Date: 8/29/2017 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful pen! Such a wonderful air to this piece, it caresses. Best of luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Date: 8/29/2017 8:13:00 AM
A lovely expression of yourself, Nette!
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Date: 8/29/2017 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette:)
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Date: 8/29/2017 7:20:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful Nette. Love the phrase "sauvignon kisses"
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