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My muse is a fawn standing with her mother as I drive down the road beside her grove she looks up but does not run neither does she approach me I stop and gaze at her delicate beauty respecting her need for space and safety My muse is a ladybug I stop to observe her motions she may or may not land on my hand she senses me but does not fly away until it is time to find more to eat or perhaps return to hibernation My muse is a hummingbird the colors of artistry the boldness of courage the movements of freedom the perseverance of hope my heart is warmed by her visits but she never stays long written 5 Jan 2023

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Date: 8/26/2023 12:03:00 PM
My muse is an angel sending words. politcal ideals, romantic words. Controversy that spins a curve. The plain old truth when it has the nerve
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Date: 8/26/2023 12:04:00 PM
At least you have one.
Date: 1/29/2023 6:43:00 AM
Gorgeous John. :)
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:03:00 PM
This is so inspiring as always, John, the hummingbird stanza stands out to me, for I feel that is my muse, bold and quick, and brief, I hope the new year is treating you well, hope you and your family are ok in all that California rain~
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Date: 1/18/2023 1:46:00 AM
Do you like them all equally or do you have a favorite John. They must vie for your affection! My Muse is fickle - wants to take all the credit, I let things be. All things being said, you write brilliantly my friend, and muse or no muse your poems rock! Be well, have fun in 2023 and keep writing your precious poetry which I look forward to reading. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/12/2023 9:05:00 PM
A lovely poem. What is my muse? I have to get to a quiet spot and think about it. Your writing has motivated me. It's so pretty. I taught my children that a humming bird is the only bird that can fly backwards and it's eggs are the size of Tic Tacs I'm glad to have come across your poem. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:48:00 PM
Truly lovely in every aspect dear friend. It reminds me of the Psalm - "like a deer in winter" as you are always seeking inspiration from everything around you and finding your muse in everyone around you R&R Bro! Blessed is your muse for she births wonderful words, metaphors and images in you! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you blessings of joyful peace for 2023
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Date: 1/6/2023 5:23:00 PM
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Date: 1/6/2023 5:22:00 PM
A lovely write, John. It's so good to see you submitting poetry. Thanks for your comment on Shadow poets. i wrote that for when I was a member of Shadowpoetry many years ago.
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:27:00 AM
So beautiful, John! Exactly what a muse should be!
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Date: 1/6/2023 4:23:00 AM
John, I am the only poet who is muse_ Less. OMG. A muse to me is a god from Greece, there were nine. I write because I.choose to. No spirit stops me or starts me. Soup this yo-yo on what a muse is. If it’s inspiration? Then,life itself is a muse… my pen, my choice write. My cat will not! Stubborn thang. Your poem is outstanding and a winner. Museless in Wine country. Pangie
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:28:00 PM
Great metaphors, John, our muse seems to be evanescent as ever:)
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Date: 1/5/2023 4:23:00 PM
Great poem, John. Beautiful, sensitive, precious as life itself. A real winner in my book. Bryan
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Date: 1/5/2023 3:48:00 PM
Just beautiful!
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