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My Morning

Freshly ground coffee dripping into the carafe. The heavenly odor permeating the air. Bright yellow explosion of sunrise climbing out of the distant sea. Morning is the best part of the day. Morning, still cool and fresh as I walk barefoot onto the deck. Steam rising from my coffee mug as I curl into the deck chair. The smell of heather from the window box mixing with the coffee aroma. Morning is the best part of the day. The doe and her fawns stepping out of the woods, Watching me as I watch them. After assessing me they cross the lawn To nibble leaves from the trees. Staying in the shade offered by the poplar tree They pretend to ignore me as they dine. I pretend to ignore them as I sit and read. Morning is surely the best part of the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Francine. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:36:00 AM
Congrats Francine on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase ...
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:07:00 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this awesome poem, Francine! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:56:00 AM
Francine, a truely enjoyable read. The best word I can think of to describe this poem is taken from the first word of your poem - "Fresh". This was a fresh, enjoyable and pleasant read. Thank you for entering it into my contest. Joe
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:37:00 PM
Big congrats on your win, fellow Bastille Day Baby! Awesome imagery in this lovely poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:19:00 PM
Sad to say, I don't get out to enjoy the early mornings anymore. Mornings can be beautiful though!...Congratulations on your win: )
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Date: 7/7/2010 12:36:00 PM
ooh, I wish my mornings were like this. He he, they couldn't be more different. You gave us a real sensory experience. Congratulations on your 2nd place win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Joe’s contest. your write was great! May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:12:00 AM
A day brightener just to read this lovely poem. Congratulations on your 2nd place win!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:23:00 AM
Awesome little slice of life painting with your free verse. A well deserved win! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:00:00 AM
Yes it is. Congratulations on your great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:03:00 PM
Yes it is. morning, especially early morning before all the hustle and bustle gets started! This was a very beautiful poem full of vivid images. Terrific write.
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Date: 4/13/2010 7:30:00 AM
This is a beauty!! We have a little cabin in the mountains, and we often do just this. Sit on the porch with our coffee, while the deer ignore us....however, it is hard to ignore them...they are so lovely to see. !
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:51:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem. Well penned
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:58:00 PM
Francine, you remind me of the commercial "The best part of waking up is folgers in your Cup" Maybe you're not old enought to remember that one.Smile! Nice Free Verse, Agape, Moses
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